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Review #1, by Daniele N. Bad days

9th May 2012:
hermoine was never this weak and shes the brightest witch of their age and hottempered so wouldnt she naturally hex him instead of running away and crying?

Author's Response: She couldn't just hex a head of magical law reinforcement...she lost her head, but was smart enough to realize she can't afford to hurt him. I think she'd rather walk away instead of hexing him and getting into trouble, but that's just my opinion.

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Review #2, by VeeKAY Chapter Two.

3rd March 2012:
This is a clever story! :) this is nicely written, and there isn't much to critique so kudos to you ;) well done! xx

Author's Response: Ha thank you! x

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