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Review #1, by Opalpixiechick Reunited at last...

7th May 2012:
Very touching. I hope you write more on this story soon. :)

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Review #2, by padmoonyfoot7 Reunited at last...

15th February 2012:
WOW! More please!!
I love this story, for some strange reason I love afterlife ones with Remus and Tonks!!
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

Author's Response: Thanks! :) The next chapter will be up soon.

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Review #3, by BK Reunited at last...

4th February 2012:
It's sad but it has plenty of potential :) update please, I'm anxious to see where it goes

Author's Response: Thanks. I have editied the first chapter and have posted up a second :)

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Review #4, by Miss Muggle Reunited at last...

3rd February 2012:
I like this story. It's a great original idea!
It is hard to read some of the paragraphs, though. It would be easier if you started a new paragraph with every new dialogue. Instead of
' "Remember that time when we put verruca powder in Emma Hyde's shoes?" "Oh yeah, that was so funny! She couldn't walk for about a week after!" '
try ' "Remember that time when we put verruca powder in Emma Hyde's shoes?"
"Oh yeah, that was so funny! She couldn't walk for about a week after!" '
It makes it so much better to read.
Otherwise, I think this is a good start to an interesting story.

Author's Response: Thanks! I have tried to separate the dialogue a bit like you said; you're right, it is a bit hard to read :) I have also writen a new chapter.

Thanks again for the review :D


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Review #5, by Miss_potter Reunited at last...

3rd February 2012:
love it :) i was actually thinking of creating a fanfiction along these lines for a while now... Its fantastic :) please continue with it!
mwa

Author's Response: Thanks! I have writen a new chapter now, hope you like it! :) You should try an afterlife fanfiction, they are really fun becuase you can use characters that wouldn't nomally meet (eg: James and Tonks).

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Review #6, by molly Reunited at last...

3rd February 2012:
really good! please write more! :)

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