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Review #1, by Redvines714 Atlantis

28th January 2012:
I decided to read this story after reading Hey Fred.. OH MY GOSH YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER!

Author's Response: haha thank you so much! :D

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Review #2, by scattered  Atlantis

28th January 2012:
This story is so perfectly written and it's absolutely brilliant! I love the way you've developed Remus and how you added that small bit about Fernir Greyback and how Remus feels sorry for him. The way you wrote about that and his resignedness about never going to a proper school was so perfect! You didn't at all pretend like Remus knew something more than he did at that age.

This has to be the longest review I have ever given, haha, but I just love this! xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much! It really bothers me when people make characters out to just KNOW things, like those nagging feelings that are realistically so improbable and impossible, with Remus's situation especially. I think it's so important to his character that he has this stretch of believing Hogwarts is impossible for him. It's incredibly sad, but so touching. Thanks again for the review, glad you enjoyed it (:

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Review #3, by ewsoucf7 Atlantis

28th January 2012:
This was completely beautiful to read. I felt as though I could feel each emotion as it was described. This is the first fic of this variety that I have read, and I must say I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you enjoyed this; I definitely put a lot of work into getting this the way I wanted it (:

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Review #4, by dreamer13 Atlantis

28th January 2012:
This was an incredible read. The language and phrasing were very good. I got so caught up in Remus' world, my heart was breaking for him before i remembered that he ACTUALLY does go to Hogwarts! :) Very well done, 10/10!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! haha that was exactly the intention, to bring you so into Remus's world at that moment that you feel the impossibility that I think he had to grapple with in those weeks. Thanks again, I'm glad you liked it (:

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Review #5, by BoOkWoRm24 Atlantis

28th January 2012:
This was cute. I liked hearing about Remus in the months after his bite it was very orrigional. You did a good job conveying the confusion that would come to a young boy after something like that happened. Good job :)

Author's Response: thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it (:

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Review #6, by Live Life Large Atlantis

28th January 2012:
Oh that was good! It really made me sad though. Are you planning on writing something about what did happen that night? Because I would love to read it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I don't know, I don't really plan things, they just sort of pop into being when I'm not trying to write but maybe some day (:

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