Reading Reviews for Cruel Fate
38 Reviews Found

Review #1, by l.catling Run

22nd June 2014:
really good i love this story but please write another chapter soon.

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Review #2, by Anne Run

6th June 2014:
So glad you're back! Loving it! Keep writing please!!!

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Review #3, by MidnightBlue_x Hands Open

16th November 2013:
This story is awesome. I love Viola, and I'm a massive fan of both Sirius and Regulus. I can't wait to read more! I hope you can update soon.

x Ely

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Review #4, by Peeves Soul Mate Hands Open

6th August 2013:
I love it! This is such a good read, you must keep on writing before I spontaneously combust! Please hurry :)

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Review #5, by EmmaLois Hands Open

28th July 2013:
Good chapter. More Regulus anytime soon? I like that viola is spending time with the gryffies, but the rest of the black family won't be happy. Please update sometime soon. I really like the way this story is going. It will be very interesting to read and I know I will enjoy it very much. Until the next update I suppose!

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Review #6, by SiriusGal Hands Open

31st May 2013:
I really liked the introduction of Lily and James, it was really funny! I also like all your scenes, they are so descriptive and creative. Great job, update soon please!

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Review #7, by SiriusGal Clocks

29th May 2013:
I love the way you've made Sirius!

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Review #8, by SiriusGal Easy To Please

29th May 2013:
Haha I love how you made the Blacks' reaction to Sirius seem so ridiculous, like they just don't understand his humor!

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Review #9, by SiriusGal Talk

29th May 2013:
Great chapter, I loved the way you described Mrs. Black!

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Review #10, by Lillian Hands Open

27th May 2013:
Nice chapter! I want her to end up with Sirius! Regulus seems like a wanker! Cant wait for the update!

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Review #11, by Mia Hands Open

26th May 2013:
Yay! You're back!
Keep on writing- I really want to know how this turns out!

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Review #12, by MARAUDERLOVE I'll Never Let Go

15th March 2013:
God i freaking love sirius black!!! He's PERFECT!!! Poor reg. really doesnt compare

Author's Response: I know, Sirius is one of my favourite characters of all time... :)

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Review #13, by WoodenFences Easy To Please

14th March 2013:
I absolutely love the way you portray Sirius. I mean it...

Author's Response: Aw thanks, I'm blushing... :D

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Review #14, by WoodenFences Talk

14th March 2013:
This is really great start to what I'm sure is an amazing story. Sirius-ly. (No pun intended... actually, there is a pun intended...) anyway, keep the awesome writing up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! No Siriusly, I mean it. ;)

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Review #15, by You know who I'll Never Let Go

1st March 2013:
Yay, you updated! :D Live the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't help but want her to get together with Sirius though...

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to R/R! I'll try to update as fast as I can, and as for Viola and Sirius, it might take a little time yet before they end up together... *looks suspcious*

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Review #16, by little_rebels The Scientist

24th October 2012:
I was just looking for another story to read, and I'm glad I found this one...

I've never read one with Regulus, or with the whole background thing with the Black family, and I really liked it :) I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews for this chapter! The story line is good so far, and your detail with each character's personality is not developing too quickly, which I like in stories. It keeps the readers wanting more :)

Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

little_rebels xx

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Review #17, by OhMyMerlin46 The Scientist

17th October 2012:
FINALLY, I have found a writer who embraces the origins of words by including acutes and graves in the appropriate places. And, as if this wasn't enough, you obviously like Coldplay; your sense of humour has me in stitches; and your fanfiction is pretty damn amazing...

You and I should be friends...

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Review #18, by Amelia Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

15th August 2012:
Please please please please please please please please update soon! I want to keep reading! This is an amazing story and I love the characters! UPDATE! IM BEGGING YOU!

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Review #19, by Esme Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

15th July 2012:
I can empathise with the "school stuff"- I have similar problems. Don't we all...

Anyway, that was a very good chapter, and I hope you update soon (hint, hint, and an extra hint.) ;)

Author's Response: I apologise to everyone for not updating, and am currently writing the new chapter, so it should be up in a week or less!

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Review #20, by Esme Clocks

15th July 2012:
I'm noticing a slight Coldplay theme in the chapter titles. Are you a Colplay fan by any chance??

Again, very good. Please update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, new chapter already up! Keep R/R! :D

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Review #21, by Esme Easy To Please

15th July 2012:
Very witty ending; please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Please keep R/R! :D

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Review #22, by Esme Talk

15th July 2012:
Very good! I am very excited to read more! Keep writing. XD

Author's Response: Thanks, Esme, please keep R/R!

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Review #23, by sara Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

22nd May 2012:
Please update? I really want to know what happens! Please don't give up!


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Review #24, by sara Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

4th May 2012:
Hey! I think this story is really good so far! And I bet it's about to get even better and I can't wait! :) So please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviwing, please keep on reading! :)

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Review #25, by WildFlower Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

25th April 2012:
Oh my! I wonder what Regulus is going to say! I hope it's nothing bad. I adore the way you've written both Sirius and Regulus, I can see why Viola would eventually become tied between them. Also, I'm happy to find out a little more about Viola, especially when Regulus asked her out. I like how you wrote him to be nervous and not cool and confident as most stories would go. So once again, great job! I can't wait for the next chappie!


XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and that writing Viola's memories did work; I was worried that it wouldn't... The next chapter might not be up for another week or two due to exams and work and all that jazz (fun, right?) but I might be able to update this weekend. Keep on R/R!!! :D

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