God i freaking love sirius black!!! He's PERFECT!!! Poor reg. really doesnt compareAuthor's Response: I know, Sirius is one of my favourite characters of all time... :) Report Review
I absolutely love the way you portray Sirius. I mean it...Author's Response: Aw thanks, I'm blushing... :D Report Review
This is really great start to what I'm sure is an amazing story. Sirius-ly. (No pun intended... actually, there is a pun intended...) anyway, keep the awesome writing up!Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! No Siriusly, I mean it. ;) Report Review
Yay, you updated! :D Live the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't help but want her to get together with Sirius though...Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to R/R! I'll try to update as fast as I can, and as for Viola and Sirius, it might take a little time yet before they end up together... *looks suspcious* Report Review
I was just looking for another story to read, and I'm glad I found this one...
I've never read one with Regulus, or with the whole background thing with the Black family, and I really liked it :) I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews for this chapter! The story line is good so far, and your detail with each character's personality is not developing too quickly, which I like in stories. It keeps the readers wanting more :)
Can't wait to see what happens next! :D
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FINALLY, I have found a writer who embraces the origins of words by including acutes and graves in the appropriate places. And, as if this wasn't enough, you obviously like Coldplay; your sense of humour has me in stitches; and your fanfiction is pretty damn amazing...
You and I should be friends... Report Review
Please please please please please please please please update soon! I want to keep reading! This is an amazing story and I love the characters! UPDATE! IM BEGGING YOU! Report Review
I can empathise with the "school stuff"- I have similar problems. Don't we all...
Anyway, that was a very good chapter, and I hope you update soon (hint, hint, and an extra hint.) ;)Author's Response: I apologise to everyone for not updating, and am currently writing the new chapter, so it should be up in a week or less! Report Review
I'm noticing a slight Coldplay theme in the chapter titles. Are you a Colplay fan by any chance??
Again, very good. Please update soon. :)Author's Response: Thanks for the review, new chapter already up! Keep R/R! :D Report Review
Very witty ending; please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Please keep R/R! :D Report Review
Very good! I am very excited to read more! Keep writing. XDAuthor's Response: Thanks, Esme, please keep R/R! Report Review
Please update? I really want to know what happens! Please don't give up!
Sara Report Review
Hey! I think this story is really good so far! And I bet it's about to get even better and I can't wait! :) So please update soon!Author's Response: Thanks for reviwing, please keep on reading! :) Report Review
Oh my! I wonder what Regulus is going to say! I hope it's nothing bad. I adore the way you've written both Sirius and Regulus, I can see why Viola would eventually become tied between them. Also, I'm happy to find out a little more about Viola, especially when Regulus asked her out. I like how you wrote him to be nervous and not cool and confident as most stories would go. So once again, great job! I can't wait for the next chappie!
XOXO WildFlower!Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and that writing Viola's memories did work; I was worried that it wouldn't... The next chapter might not be up for another week or two due to exams and work and all that jazz (fun, right?) but I might be able to update this weekend. Keep on R/R!!! :D Report Review
OMGSH! I wonder what's going to happen! I hope Regulus doesn't say something like "Maybe it's better if you don't stay here..." or "We should take a break...for a while..." or ANYTHING bad haha! Bloody evil parents Reg and Siri have, I just want to throw myself into the story and punch their lights out (and probably get hexed to timbuktu) and I can see Sirius trying to wriggle his way in with Viola ^^ hehe!
I can't wait for the next chapter :) I'm loving this story!Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad that you don't like the Black parents, that was what I was aiming for... :) Don't worry, Regulus isn't going to break up with her or anything, you'll have to wait and see what he ends up saying... ;) Please keep on reading and reviewing! Report Review
Its quite GOOD you should finish it ! :):):):):):) ;);););) :0;0;0;0;0;0;0Author's Response: Thanks, chapter 4 is up! :) Report Review
pretty good, but talk about leaving us with a cliffhanger, wheres the rest of the story!!!???Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The chapter should be up soon, but I've been pretty busy with life and such, but hopefully the next chapter will done up for reading soon! Report Review
This is a cute story so far. I like Sirius and I'm not really a fan of OCs but I like Viola, she's a well-developed not over the top character. Keep up the good work! :DAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm on holiday now, so hopefully I'll be able to update soon. Please keep reading! :) Report Review
*hyperventilates* I just found this story and I love it to bits! Please, please update asap, I'm on the edge of my seat here!
RhiAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I've got a lot going on, but I'll try to update when I can. Report Review
ooh, bit of tension between sirius and carter.. i love the characters you have made so far, and i love how sirius mocks his family! most definately checking in again and again and again and- im sure you get the picture. your (now) most faithful reviewer:
-LfgAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm afraid the next chapter won't be up for perhaps a week or so, as I have tons of late rehersal's and homework, plus exams, but I'm trying to write whenever I can! Report Review
oohhh.. cliffy cliffy!
i'm taking a wild guess and saying that they're arguing about carter. *wriggles her eyebrows*
am i right or am i right? ;)
nice chapter-- and i agree with her on the humour part-- pads sure does have a whacking sense of humour!
fannaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, and as for the argument, you'll have to wait and see... Report Review
Nooo! I wish the chapter was a little bit longer! I'm loving it so far! I've never come across a story that had Sirius trying to reconcile with his family (probably because he never would) but I like it because it's different. I also like Viola, she seems pretty cool and down-to-earth. Perhaps I may have missed it, but I'm curious to what house she is in at Hogwarts? I can't wait to find out more about her! Anyway, again great chapter! I can't wait for more! 10/10
XOXO WildFlower!Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm trying to make my chapters a little bit longer, because I know they've been kind of short. Hopefully the next one will be longer! Report Review
lol, of all people to walk in on them snogging... it's sirius. honestly, mrs.black would have been way more dramatic.
but i like your version of pads... he's certainly got a sense of humour i like..
beginning to get absolutely loyal,
fannaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, hope that I can keep you loyal.. :) Report Review
lol, that was quite a kicking start!
i like the sense of humor and i hate the old hag.
fannaAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, hope you keep reading! Report Review
I think I'm going to keep an eye on this story, it has me very intrigued and I'm eager to see where it goes! Awesome so far! Can't wait for another chapter!
XOXO WildFlower!Author's Response: Thanks, the third chapter will hopefully be up soon! :) Report Review
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