Reading Reviews for Cruel Fate
  
27 Reviews Found

Review #1, by MARAUDERLOVE I'll Never Let Go

15th March 2013:
God i freaking love sirius black!!! He's PERFECT!!! Poor reg. really doesnt compare

Author's Response: I know, Sirius is one of my favourite characters of all time... :)

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Review #2, by WoodenFences Easy To Please

14th March 2013:
I absolutely love the way you portray Sirius. I mean it...

Author's Response: Aw thanks, I'm blushing... :D

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Review #3, by WoodenFences Talk

14th March 2013:
This is really great start to what I'm sure is an amazing story. Sirius-ly. (No pun intended... actually, there is a pun intended...) anyway, keep the awesome writing up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! No Siriusly, I mean it. ;)

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Review #4, by You know who I'll Never Let Go

1st March 2013:
Yay, you updated! :D Live the story, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I can't help but want her to get together with Sirius though...

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to R/R! I'll try to update as fast as I can, and as for Viola and Sirius, it might take a little time yet before they end up together... *looks suspcious*

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Review #5, by little_rebels The Scientist

24th October 2012:
I was just looking for another story to read, and I'm glad I found this one...

I've never read one with Regulus, or with the whole background thing with the Black family, and I really liked it :) I'm surprised you haven't gotten more reviews for this chapter! The story line is good so far, and your detail with each character's personality is not developing too quickly, which I like in stories. It keeps the readers wanting more :)

Can't wait to see what happens next! :D

little_rebels xx

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Review #6, by OhMyMerlin46 The Scientist

17th October 2012:
FINALLY, I have found a writer who embraces the origins of words by including acutes and graves in the appropriate places. And, as if this wasn't enough, you obviously like Coldplay; your sense of humour has me in stitches; and your fanfiction is pretty damn amazing...

You and I should be friends...

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Review #7, by Amelia Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

15th August 2012:
Please please please please please please please please update soon! I want to keep reading! This is an amazing story and I love the characters! UPDATE! IM BEGGING YOU!

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Review #8, by Esme Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

15th July 2012:
I can empathise with the "school stuff"- I have similar problems. Don't we all...

Anyway, that was a very good chapter, and I hope you update soon (hint, hint, and an extra hint.) ;)

Author's Response: I apologise to everyone for not updating, and am currently writing the new chapter, so it should be up in a week or less!

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Review #9, by Esme Clocks

15th July 2012:
I'm noticing a slight Coldplay theme in the chapter titles. Are you a Colplay fan by any chance??

Again, very good. Please update soon. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, new chapter already up! Keep R/R! :D

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Review #10, by Esme Easy To Please

15th July 2012:
Very witty ending; please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Please keep R/R! :D

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Review #11, by Esme Talk

15th July 2012:
Very good! I am very excited to read more! Keep writing. XD

Author's Response: Thanks, Esme, please keep R/R!

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Review #12, by sara Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

22nd May 2012:
Please update? I really want to know what happens! Please don't give up!

Sara

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Review #13, by sara Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

4th May 2012:
Hey! I think this story is really good so far! And I bet it's about to get even better and I can't wait! :) So please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviwing, please keep on reading! :)

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Review #14, by WildFlower Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

25th April 2012:
Oh my! I wonder what Regulus is going to say! I hope it's nothing bad. I adore the way you've written both Sirius and Regulus, I can see why Viola would eventually become tied between them. Also, I'm happy to find out a little more about Viola, especially when Regulus asked her out. I like how you wrote him to be nervous and not cool and confident as most stories would go. So once again, great job! I can't wait for the next chappie!

10/10

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story, and that writing Viola's memories did work; I was worried that it wouldn't... The next chapter might not be up for another week or two due to exams and work and all that jazz (fun, right?) but I might be able to update this weekend. Keep on R/R!!! :D

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Review #15, by RhiRhi Don't Panic (Yeah Right....)

23rd April 2012:
OMGSH! I wonder what's going to happen! I hope Regulus doesn't say something like "Maybe it's better if you don't stay here..." or "We should take a break...for a while..." or ANYTHING bad haha! Bloody evil parents Reg and Siri have, I just want to throw myself into the story and punch their lights out (and probably get hexed to timbuktu) and I can see Sirius trying to wriggle his way in with Viola ^^ hehe!

I can't wait for the next chapter :) I'm loving this story!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad that you don't like the Black parents, that was what I was aiming for... :) Don't worry, Regulus isn't going to break up with her or anything, you'll have to wait and see what he ends up saying... ;) Please keep on reading and reviewing!

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Review #16, by Anonymous Clocks

17th April 2012:
Its quite GOOD you should finish it ! :):):):):):) ;);););) :0;0;0;0;0;0;0

Author's Response: Thanks, chapter 4 is up! :)

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Review #17, by Anonymous Clocks

12th April 2012:
pretty good, but talk about leaving us with a cliffhanger, wheres the rest of the story!!!???

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The chapter should be up soon, but I've been pretty busy with life and such, but hopefully the next chapter will done up for reading soon!

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Review #18, by Tazzi Clocks

23rd March 2012:
This is a cute story so far. I like Sirius and I'm not really a fan of OCs but I like Viola, she's a well-developed not over the top character. Keep up the good work! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm on holiday now, so hopefully I'll be able to update soon. Please keep reading! :)

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Review #19, by RhiRhi Clocks

8th March 2012:
*hyperventilates* I just found this story and I love it to bits! Please, please update asap, I'm on the edge of my seat here!
10/10
Rhi

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! I've got a lot going on, but I'll try to update when I can.

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Review #20, by Lfg Clocks

28th February 2012:
ooh, bit of tension between sirius and carter.. i love the characters you have made so far, and i love how sirius mocks his family! most definately checking in again and again and again and- im sure you get the picture. your (now) most faithful reviewer:
-Lfg

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm afraid the next chapter won't be up for perhaps a week or so, as I have tons of late rehersal's and homework, plus exams, but I'm trying to write whenever I can!

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Review #21, by hpfanno1 Clocks

23rd February 2012:
oohhh.. cliffy cliffy!
i'm taking a wild guess and saying that they're arguing about carter. *wriggles her eyebrows*
am i right or am i right? ;)
lol.
nice chapter-- and i agree with her on the humour part-- pads sure does have a whacking sense of humour!
loyally,
fanna

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and as for the argument, you'll have to wait and see...

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Review #22, by WildFlower Clocks

23rd February 2012:
Nooo! I wish the chapter was a little bit longer! I'm loving it so far! I've never come across a story that had Sirius trying to reconcile with his family (probably because he never would) but I like it because it's different. I also like Viola, she seems pretty cool and down-to-earth. Perhaps I may have missed it, but I'm curious to what house she is in at Hogwarts? I can't wait to find out more about her! Anyway, again great chapter! I can't wait for more! 10/10

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review! I'm trying to make my chapters a little bit longer, because I know they've been kind of short. Hopefully the next one will be longer!

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Review #23, by hpfanno1 Easy To Please

22nd February 2012:
lol, of all people to walk in on them snogging... it's sirius. honestly, mrs.black would have been way more dramatic.
but i like your version of pads... he's certainly got a sense of humour i like..
update soon!
beginning to get absolutely loyal,
fanna

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, hope that I can keep you loyal.. :)

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Review #24, by hpfanno1 Talk

22nd February 2012:
lol, that was quite a kicking start!
i like the sense of humor and i hate the old hag.
reading on..
definately interested,
fanna

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, hope you keep reading!

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Review #25, by WildFlower Easy To Please

15th February 2012:
I think I'm going to keep an eye on this story, it has me very intrigued and I'm eager to see where it goes! Awesome so far! Can't wait for another chapter!

XOXO WildFlower!

Author's Response: Thanks, the third chapter will hopefully be up soon! :)

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