Nice to see more M/K. Good start. I look forward to more.Author's Response: Thanks. :) Report Review
Finally someone writes about Marcus! I'm soo happy I stumbled onto this :) You pulled the angry death eater off. Though we didn't see much in this chapter, like I wish there would've been a flashback or something similiar to show what was it exactly that got him into prison.
But all in all I loved it.Author's Response: A flashback might be written- that or Marcus will end up discusing it with Katie in a later chapter. Most likely the latter.
Thank you so much. :) Report Review
oh,oh,oh! First off,kudos to you for venturing out to Marcus Flint,whom is--if i understand correctly--is a character rarely touched on.
So I'm guessing this is going to be a Marcus/Katie? Or am I misinterpreting it?
I have to say,I figured this would be good,but for some unknown reason,I feel really attached to this story. I really,really,really love it! I don't know why,but I just latch myself on to some stories(:
Do you need/would you like a beta?If so,shoot me a PM! I am so favoriting! 10/10
EverAuthor's Response: It will be a Marcus/Katie. Eventually. If they ever get their act together. They're some pretty messed up characters, but they'll get it in the end. (I think) :)
Thank you so much for the review. XD Report Review
I like this so far. I think it's got the potential to be a good story. It's intriguing, and I feel like you're doing a fine job with the characters so far, particularly Marcus (as you should be, after all, you are writing first person from his point of view). Katie still seems a little flat, but you've only just introduced her so I'm thinking she'll develop as you write more. I'm hoping you do write more because it is interesting so far. I just love stories with minor characters.Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
I'll work on Katie. I find her a little hard to write at times, but she's not supposed to be the nicest person to Marcus during the beginning of the story either.
And I'm glad you love Marcus. He's truly kind of a sweetheart.
Again, thank you for the review. :) Report Review
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