I've never read the poem, but that was a really powerful one-shot. The image you painted of Sirius in his cell was so vivid and real. I could see him pacing in my mind.
The grammar and spelling seemed fine, I didn't notice anything odd.
The syntax was lovely. Everything was written and phrased just beautifully and added so much to the piece. I still can't get over the image of him pacing.
Great one-shot! I really loved it!Author's Response: IÂ´m very glad you liked my one-shot.
The poem is originally in German. I recited it in school, and since then it became one of my favourite poems. I always had that immage in my mind, of someone in a cell. iÂ´m glad you could see it too ;).
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