Reading Reviews for Never ending circle
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Review #1, by luvinpadfoot Never ending circle

1st July 2012:
I've never read the poem, but that was a really powerful one-shot. The image you painted of Sirius in his cell was so vivid and real. I could see him pacing in my mind.

The grammar and spelling seemed fine, I didn't notice anything odd.

The syntax was lovely. Everything was written and phrased just beautifully and added so much to the piece. I still can't get over the image of him pacing.

Great one-shot! I really loved it!

Author's Response: I´m very glad you liked my one-shot.
The poem is originally in German. I recited it in school, and since then it became one of my favourite poems. I always had that immage in my mind, of someone in a cell. i´m glad you could see it too ;).
thank you very much for reviewing.

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