Oh.My.Gosh.
I just so love this one-shot! It gave a better point of view for James and it's so sweet! I could feel the love... *grins* I wish this would be longer though.


Great job!


-Failed_and_Forgotten

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SO CUTE AND ADORABLE

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Aw I love this story it's so natural I mean that scene was definitely worth seeing

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loved it hope there will be more

Author's Response: I have actually written other James/Lily stories, but none of them go together. I am glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing!!

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This is so sweet! I really liked your characterizations and you write descriptions really well. I really enjoyed it :-D

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Oh! I really enjoyed this oneshot! I thought it was so cute and i could just picture these two groups sitting outside on a warm day! It was such a fun piece as well and you did such a great job with the description throughout the whole oneshot! I liked getting to see this through James and just gush! I loved this so much! Really, i could picture this whole thing and I loved the idea behind it as well! Great Job!

~Slytherinchica08~
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Author's Response: Awesome review! Thank you so much! I am thrilled that you liked this story so much! I had so much fun writing it, so I am glad you enjoyed reading it :) Thank you so much for this review! It made my day-er...night

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So cute! Adding it to my favorites!

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ASDFGHJKL;

What in the name of cuteness is this?! OMG! I am fan-girling right now!! You wrote them so perfectly...so cute...are you sure you just want this to be a one-shot? I mean...a few more chapters wouldn't hurt but that's really your choice...I'm just saying! xD I love it.

I love the whole idea of their first kiss being a dare from Lily's friends...omg! omg! I love this! 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You're too kind :) Iam so glad you liked it so much! Perhaps I will lengthen it...I really never even considered it...

Thanks so much for your awesome review, it really means alot to me :)

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One of the best James/Lily one shots I've ever read

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That was really good for your first chapter!!! Is Lily going to fall for him? Keep updating! :)

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This story was cute. It was well written and seemed to flow at the perfect pace. One of the things that I really liked about it was that when Peter Pettigrew was mentioned you didn't say anything about him just beinig a tag along, he seemed just as much a part of the four as Serius and Remus. It really annoys me when people make him seem like he wasn't as important as the other three because he was at this point in time. It makes my day when I come across a fic that actually makes him sound normal. Ok my rant is finished. Anyway you did a really good job on this and I really enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response: Oh thank you! What a lovely review! Ya, I like when people include Peter without making him an utter creep, even though I do despise him when he was older, because he didn't seem to be when he was younger. He was a normal guy like the others. So I'm glad you liked it and so happy you thought it was good :)

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This made me so happy when I read it. It was very cute and an adorable story! I haven't read a James and Lily kiss for a while, and I admit I'm very happy that I read yours. Truly a great job! =]

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PS, Lily and James is almost all I read, so...

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oh how I wish it wasn't a one-shot but a long, full story!! soo good and sweet :) loved it !

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