Reading Reviews for A Cannon's Harpy
  
36 Reviews Found

Review #1, by jdante5 He Knows that She Knows that...

23rd May 2013:
Congratulations, this was a great story line! I enjoyed it so much, I just may read it again.
Also, the fact that you know the difference between 'then' and 'than' was WONDERFUL. I can't tell you how may of the other 'authors' don't know the difference and use them incorrectly. Drives me crazy. ALSO, the use of correct punctuation was great. So many of the other people, who are writing, don't use punctuation. They end up with run-on sentences, that you have to reread several times, to make sense of what they are saying. Really destroys the flow of what you are reading, so much so, you can't get invested in the story.
Just a great job with Cannon's Harpy!!! I look forward to a sequel. Keep up the great work!!

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Review #2, by Snake323co He Knows that She Knows that...

23rd May 2013:
Excellent story! Took me a little bit to wrap my head around the altered storyline, from what I'm used to. But once I did, I truly enjoyed the story!! Couldn't stop reading. Wish it was longer. Great job!!

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Review #3, by A thankful fan He Knows that She Knows that...

17th April 2013:
I absolutely loved this story! It is a fantastic combination of the characters developed in the novels and your own spin on them. The only thing I could think of to make it better would be a sequel (typos and odd horrible cheesy lines included). Thank you so much for writing an incredible piece of fan-fiction!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story. I am still trying to get a sequel together, but not really finding the time at the moment. Thank you for leaving a review!

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Review #4, by ginnyrulz Prologue - A Final

1st April 2013:
just wondering, did you change all the words like passion to "peyebrowion" and love to "Tinky Winky" because i've seen it in a couple stories all with different writers and i'm getting confused.

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Review #5, by Carlee He Knows that She Knows that...

1st March 2013:
Oh please, oh please write a sequel!!! I loved this story, one of my favorite one I have read! Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you. I hope to find the inspiration to start writing a sequel sometime soon.

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Review #6, by GinnyFan91 He Knows that She Knows that...

13th February 2013:
wow - what a final!
I've followed the story for a while and I love it!
You're an amazing writer - and I would love to read a sequeal ;)

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! I will hopefully get time to write some more in the near future.

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Review #7, by hplover97 He Knows that She Knows that...

11th February 2013:
I absolutely loved this! fan fic, one night i was very bored and couldn't sleep and i picked up my computer and read every chapter that you had posted, and then i waited and waited for more chapters, and you posted a few and then stopped adding them for a while so I stopped checking, and then today I just randomly checked to see if you had updated it and there where 2 chapters I hadn't read, and so i stayed up late even though i have school tomorrow just to finish reading your fan fic. Please, continue writing this!

Author's Response: Sorry about the delay with chapters. Life got in the way and I forgot about posting, but I'm really glad that you enjoyed the story. I hope to write more in the near future. Thank you for the comment!

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Review #8, by Christie He Knows that She Knows that...

6th February 2013:
Loved the story and look forward to reading more from you.

Author's Response: Thank you. Hopefully I find the time to write a sequel or something else.

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Review #9, by sorcha He Knows that She Knows that...

6th February 2013:
Epilogue epilogue epilogue! Sequal sequal sequal! Please please please! That is amazing! I was so nervous during the whole final! Ah! Please please do a sequal! Your writing is amazing!

Thank you for such a great story!
Xx

Author's Response: Hahaha. I'm still considering my options. I really like the way it is at the moment and I'm scared of ruining it. Thank you for the comment! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #10, by charm_the_stag A Coming Together of Two

18th January 2013:
This is a truly underrated story!
I think this is a wonderful fic! One of my favourites.
It's different and quidditch fics are always fun to read.

Mysterious Harry is one of my favourite characters.
I hope you update soon because I can't wait for the final match!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I hope you enjoy the final!

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Review #11, by hplover A Coming Together of Two

1st December 2012:
I really love this chapter, i can't wait for the final cup match!

Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy the final.

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Review #12, by GinnyFan91 A Changing Life

26th November 2012:
Loved it as usual :)

Can't wait to read the wedding!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #13, by hp lover A Changing Life

25th November 2012:
i love this fan fic, i can't wait for another chapterr!

Author's Response: Glad you are liking it! Thanks

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Review #14, by sorcha A Changing Life

21st November 2012:
I can not wait to read more! Completely and utterly my favourite story. I'm telling you, I've read a lot on thus but this is by far no. 1!

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #15, by frankenstin97 A Day at the Matches

20th November 2012:
I hope there is a new chapter very very soon

Author's Response: Next chapter is just waiting to be validated. Thanks!

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Review #16, by Martine A Day at the Matches

18th November 2012:
I really liked the story and i am looking forward to the rest of the story(:

Author's Response: Really glad that you like the story. Thank you for the comment!

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Review #17, by sorcha A Day at the Matches

18th November 2012:
Ahaha! That was totally totally super! I've read the whole thing twice already! Can't wait for more! Please be soon!! :D

Author's Response: I'm just waiting for the last four chapters to be approved. Thank you for the comment!

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Review #18, by hpfan A Day at the Matches

18th November 2012:
Please write more! This was amazing! Really need to know what happens next!

Author's Response: The story is complete, just waiting to get all the chapters approved. Thank you!

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Review #19, by GinnyFan91 A Day at the Matches

17th November 2012:
Love your story, just noticed 5 chapters I hadn't read and I almost shrieked from joy! Love love love :)

I'm actually really glad that Malfoy and Patrick are out of the picture now, and that you didn't wait for the final, I read the story for the Harry/Ginny moments, love them! And you write them so well! Can't wait for the wedding, but wouldn't mind a few filler chapters and perhaps a sequel (wink, wink)

Anyway, lots of praises - my current favourite story!

Author's Response: Thank you. There'll be one filler chapter before the wedding and before the final. I hope you enjoy them!

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Review #20, by MandyMuggle An Unexpected Change

10th November 2012:
This fanfic is amazing! I read through the entire thing in two days and I love it! Please update soon! :)

Author's Response: The next chapter has been uploaded. I'm really glad that you are enjoying the story and thank you for the comment!

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Review #21, by Abbie The End of a Friend

11th August 2012:
I love this story so far! I want to read more!

Author's Response: Hi. Thank you for the comment. Will be posting again now.

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Review #22, by GinnyFan91 The End of a Friend

2nd June 2012:
No

You can't seriously end a chapter like this? Come on??

You gotta update ASAP!

Anyway, love it as always, but I miss some Harry/Ginny moments??

Keep it up, love it - truely, madly, deeply ;)

Author's Response: Sorry for not replying. I had some problems on this site and got behind with my posting. Thank you for the review.

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Review #23, by Fery criss A Passing Mist

25th May 2012:
Great! Hope you update soon! :) btw how do i follow this story?

Author's Response: Not sure exactly, but I have posted the next chapters, it should be up in a few days. It just needs to be approved. Glad you like the story, thank you for leaving comment.

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Review #24, by Hannah Remembering the Past

23rd May 2012:
ok.. i was kind of skeptical when i first started reading this coz it was so confusing, i mean the fact that Harry doesnt know the Weasley's Ginny excepted, nd wondering about his background as in is it the same one lyk the original... but, it's turned out to be pretty awsome! i like your writing style and i guess i'd like to knw more about what's going to happen to harry and ginny!
all in all an awsome read... thnx

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you are enjoying the story. More of the back story will be revealed in the coming chapters. I hope you keep reading and enjoying! Thank you for taking the time to comment.

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Review #25, by Haivland A Passing Mist

19th May 2012:
I like the story so far. i look forward to the upcoming chapters

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it :)

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