I clicked in reviews, and I couldn't see my review, so to be sure, I'm posting another one, because I love your story and its amazing :)
My weirdest quirk is that I eat all of the food on my plate separately, instead of mixing it all together. People tell me that's weird :DAuthor's Response: aw thanks so much!! :)
and haha i do that too, you're not alone!! ;D Report Review
Good story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
Good chapter once again. plz write fasterAuthor's Response: thanks and im doing my best to get it in, hopefully by the weekend at the latest Report Review
Excellent chapter =]
I'm impressed that Harry was able to control himself in front of his parents. If I was him I think I would've cried or danced or ran and hugged them..or all three things lol
Nicely thought of by Hermione, some good quick thinking!
Can't wait for them to meet with Dumbledore!! That'll be an interesting conversation to say the least!
My weirdest quirk.eh...I always fold my notes (as in money) the same way in my wallet...Author's Response: oh thanks so much!
and yeah, i figured, after all he's been through, Harry had the strength to steel himself in the presence of his late family when appropriate :)
I can't wait for the meeting a well, im almost finished with that chapter so i hope you like it when it's finally up! :P Report Review
A: I have no clue actually!
Love the chapter! Thanks!
-FawkesAuthor's Response: thanks for the review! Report Review
Best chapter yet in my personal opinion! :P Wierdest quirk? Damn... mines probably that I sometimes just start dancing at random occasions when I'm in a good mood.Author's Response: haha and there's nothin' wrong with that :P thanks for the review! :) Report Review
Wow, this chapter was brilliant, you HAVE to post very, very soon like NOW! xx
Weirdest quirk would have to be ... that I always have to sit on my bed when reading, I can never concentrate anywhere elseAuthor's Response: haha thanks so much!! and i haven't quite finished the next chapter, but since im on my reading week break, expect an update within the next few days! (i hope) :) Report Review
I love your story - and your little questions at the end, so I'm going to review again :)
First of all: This chapter is pretty hilarious. Thumbs up.
Secondly: Probably my dolls house complete with furniture, people and a dog. It went everywhere with me. It's in the top of my wardrobe at the moment :)Author's Response: oh thanks so much! :D and that's sweet 'bout your doll house! i wish i still had mine, there were good times with that one haha (: Report Review
I thought Sirius was going to find them!!
Not sure the word count but it felt a little short =( Would love them to be longer! I think you've got the relationship between the Marauders right, and I like the banter between Sirius and Lily =]
Favourite movie snack...A big packet of Galaxy Minstrels! Anything chocolate really, I'm a little bit of an addict =PAuthor's Response: lol not quite yet! ;P and yeah, im definitely going to be making them longer, thanks so so much for your great reviews! :D Report Review
Love this one as well. It's pretty much all I can say really...
My fave movie snack has to be popcorn. Simple but tasty :p
Fall down the stairs? You're starting to sound like TonksAuthor's Response: lmao, yeaah i get that a lot..im quite clumsy :P Report Review
I love this Chapter as well. And my fave toy? Hmm probs my Snoopy! Whooo! And he too sits next to me on my bed :)Author's Response: lol that's awesome :P and thanks for the review! Report Review
good one but plzzz make it fasterAuthor's Response: thanks for the review, i'm rather bombarded by school work at the moment, but i'll do my best to update sometime next week! :) Report Review
Wow nice story! Would love it if you could update! Because it seems like its going to get interesting!Author's Response: haha thanks a lot! next update should be up by next week; it may be a little late tho, because of assignments and whatnot, but i'll do my best! (: Report Review
Love the story! Keep Updating!
A: Pretzel Nuggets!
-FawkesAuthor's Response: thanks! and pretzel nuggets, huh? i've never heard of those, but they sound yummy haha Report Review
Oh...and please update!Author's Response: hahah next one should be up soon! :D Report Review
Great chapter :D x
Cannot wait until the two times combined :D x
Favourite Movie Snack: Either biscuits or crisps :D x
You've made me hungry by asking me about food :P xAuthor's Response: haha thanks, that should be happening soon ;)
and sorry 'bout makin you hungry, i was hungry when i wrote that :P Report Review
This is brilliant. There are a few grammar mistakes, but the way you've characterised everyone (particularly Sirius) makes it so enjoyable I hardly noticed!
I particularly liked these parts:
"He was 6'1 as well; although if asked, Sirius would promptly say he was the taller one, and anyone that said differently was really too short to have an opinion."
" "Uh-oh, he's in Lily Mode. James?" said Remus, starting to approach his friend.
"No, that won't work." Sirius said. He then took 3 long strides to James' bed and slapped him across the face.
"Bloody OW! Dammit Black, what the hell?!" "
Please update soon! :)
MarauderLover7.Author's Response: haha thanks so much! and yeah, i absolutely love writing the marauders, they are just too much fun not to :D im so glad you liked it, next update will be very soon! :) Report Review
Great chaptef :-) x
My favourite holiday will have to be christmas as it's the one day you can get all the family together without too much arguing xAuthor's Response: ah, that's true..christmas is pretty great that way :D and thanks for the review! (: Report Review
So far so good, I think the first chapter was better than this one, can't exactly put my finger on why though, since I liked the banter between the boys...*shrugs*
Favourite toy...well I still have (and occasionally play) my game boy colour from when I was like 12, but I bet you meant like younger so...lol I just thought of it. My Puppy In My Pocket toys. You could order them from cereal boxes and stuff. I still have all of mine =D And I even have the limited edition house to put them all in! lol good times x) Also love lego!!!
PS, I also still have a teddy from when I was younger that I also sleep with so you're not alone ;)Author's Response: lol thanks for the reviews in any case, i really love them! and haha i still have my game boy too, as well as my lego sets xD but yeah, totally agree, childhood was the best!
ps, i'm glad im not the only one who appreciates a good teddy bear :D Report Review
Hmmm, random questions..I like it =]
Favourite holiday..that's really hard...does my birthday count =P Nah haha. I suppose it'd have to be christmas, I don't like dressing up for halloween, although free sweets are always good!!Author's Response: hahah i think birthdays should always count as a personal holiday :P and thanks for the review! :D Report Review
Heya. Loving this Story, like the concept sound like its going to be really good :) already hooked please dont stop writing :)Author's Response: haha thanks so much! new chapter should be up by the weekend :) Report Review
Heya. Loving this Story, like the concept sound like its going to be really good :) already hooked please dont stop writing :)Author's Response: haha thanks so much! new chapter should be up by this weekend (: Report Review
Heya. Loving this Story, like the concept sound like its going to be really good :) already hooked please dont stop writing :) Report Review
I had a stuffed Elmo whic I slept with until like age six.
Love the story! Keep updating! Thanks!
-FawkesAuthor's Response: lol thats awesome :P and thanks, update number 3 should be on its way by the weekend! Report Review
Thanksgiving: the foo is amazing and my mom is the best cook
Christmas Eve is a close second: we are Italian so celebrate it
Please continue the story! I like the beginning! Thanks!
-FawkesAuthor's Response: haha thanks for the review! :) Report Review
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