loved it you should write a longer one next time
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This was a sweet story of the two of them, I did think that you used the 'yeh' word a little too much where it might not have been needed. I don't think it comes out that way all the time (I have been to the UK) But it was just a thought. Anyway, very sweet, this just made them completely honest with each other, and were really able to talk about everything, even if it was uncomfortable. It's so important in relationships.
I thought maybe Ginny was a little OOC, but that might have been 'cause she was pregnant lol.
Great job overall :) Report Review
Such a wonderful story! I'm always reading it! Report Review
I love this. Very Sweet. :)Author's Response: I'm so glad! Thank you! Report Review
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