LOVE this! you write really well, and the story is so captivating :) i hope you update soon, though i do prefer quality and length. Your story is so sweet, i really love it and now the tension is rising and dwbhyudeswhyjudewyyudu jimexcitedjgcdshgfyrghjg! so awesome! Report Review
What?? Seriously!! Cliff-hanger!! Why are you guys doing this to me? Make an awesome story, get to the good part (Which is usually in chapter 16), then stop?? You are just cruel, cruel peoples! You should be punished! But with your computer so you can write more! Lol!! I can't wait until you write more!! And you better!Author's Response: Thanks I know it is a rubbish place to stop, but I was having a bit of writers block, then life got pretty sucky and I just can't write just now and I didn't want to leave people looking for another chapter when it wasn't coming. I've been waiting ages for some of the stories I'm reading and I know how frustrating it can be, but I literally have no time for writing. I'm really glad that you've enjoyed my story and thanks for taking the time to read it. x Report Review
I don't know if it's been a long time since you posted this chapter, but... Did you really intent to not going on with it? I know, sometimes real life really makes impossible to go on with, but It makes me so sad... :(
You've shown such talent, your chapters are so well balanced, with an amount of words that makes any reader realley happy!
I really, really hope you'll get the opportunity to complete this!Author's Response: I had started the next chapter and got about half way through it, but couldn't make my mind up about what to put in it and I just wasn't happy with it and like I said life is pretty rubbish just now. When I started this story I worked 3 days a week and had loads of time for writing. Now I'm a full time teacher which means working way beyond 9 to 5 hours and now my mum is in hospital and life is just mega busy and writing just can't be a priority now. I had the whole story mapped out and who knows maybe one day I can finish it.
Thanks for taking the time to read what I have managed to write. x Report Review
This story is seriously good. you've had me up till 2 am with this, im hooked... please update soon this is really good :D Report Review
Please, please, please continue writing! Your story is written in such a great way and the end of this chapter just blew my mind. It makes me crazy that of all times you have to stop writing right now!
I'm really keen on reading the next chapter.
Really nice story. Report Review
hello,its me again,noori,i read this chapter for the third time,and just luv it,i am still waiting for the next chapters,an would love to open the website up and find maximum 2 new chapters on this,like i said before,this is my favorite story,so who wouldn't want to complete it,regards,noori Report Review
OH MY GOD!!! PLEASE UPDATE! I have been waiting for the longest time for your update, and I am literally going insane waiting for it. This last chapter was seriously amazing and I want to know what happens, so PLEASE UPDATE! Report Review
I thought this was great... I have liked this story from the beginning. Report Review
This is a really good story, i really enjoyed it, please post up the next chapter soon or i will scream :) Report Review
OMG this is my favorite chapter so far! Report Review
Gah... need more.. please
now that i have returned to sanity. I love your story so far great writing. Please continue, can't wait for the next chapter Report Review
I have not been able to stop reading this story since I started it two days ago. It's really great so far, I like it a lot. I've been noticing a few areas where you're sentence structure gets confusing and where there are extra words that shouldn't be there, however, these are pretty easily overlooked. I am absolutely taken away by your writing. It is so wonderful. I just recommend taking a little more time to edit your work to make sure everything makes sense. Keep writing! I'm excited to read what happens next!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I'm glad you like the story. Sorry you didn't like some of my writing. I always take a lot of time to edit my work, but when you work solidly on something for a month, sometimes you can't see the errors right infront of you. I tend to write it as it comes into my head or as I think Hermione will be thinking it, so it may seem like I'm rambling, which I know some of the time I am, but Hermione is pretty confused at parts in the story and so it may come out pretty confusing on the page. I always read and re- read my work so many times before I edit and I am currently going back and re- editing earlier chapters, so hopefully any mistakes you've noticed will be fixed.
Thanks for reading and hopefully you will like what it to come. Report Review
love it! please dont take long for the next oneAuthor's Response: I am so sorry. I really didn't mean for the next chapter to take so long. I was working on it and then Christmas stuff got in the way and before I knew it the Christmas deadline came and I had missed it. But I will be working hard on the story over Christmas and I promise you will have a new chapter in January. Hopefully it will be worth the wait. x Report Review
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!Author's Response: Yeah me too. I just wish I could get it written. It's over half done. I'm so sorry I couldn't get it done before Christmas, but keep looking for it in January. Hopefully it will be worth the wait. x Report Review
Love love LOVE! I just read all the chapters in one go. Tell your fans to Beat that.XD I am a fan now Author's Response: Wow! That must have taken you a while. Thanks so much for reading. Always love getting new fans. Please keep reading and reviewing. I would love to know what you think of what I have coming up. x Report Review
This story is amazing !!! I love it !! I love it!!! I love it!Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm really glad you like the story. I kind of know where I want the story to go, but I am having real problems with the chapters just now. Nothing I right seems good enough, so I'm really glad that you're liking it.
Please keep reading and thanks again for reviewing. x Report Review
Really can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: I know me neither. Hopefully you'll like it. Sorry I couldn't get it done in time for Christmas, but it will be there in the new year, so keep an eye out. x Report Review
God that sucks... I have been reading this story and I thought there was another chapter and there isn't O.O... I LOVE THIS STORY! It's really really good and I just want you to keep writing!!!Author's Response: Thanks for reading and sorry to disppoint. Doing a few edits just now and just trying to tweak a few bits that I wasn't happy with. I know I want to keep writing too, but there just isn't enough hours in the day. Each chapter seems to be getting longer and longer and it's taking forever to write, but I'm always working hard on it. Thanks for reviewing and please keep reading. x Report Review
awesome as always. please update soon.Author's Response: Thanks so much. Sorry that I haven't been able to update sooner. I would have loved to have given you a chapter over Christmas, but I just couldn't get the chapter done in time, but keep a look out in January. I'll be working hard over the Christmas break. x Report Review
I'm so glad that you updated!!! This chapter was really good :D I like how you got down to what was bothering hermione and let her show draco how she was feeling and vice versa...and i really like how their relationship is developing, i think this story is coming along VERY nicely and i can't wait until the next chapter!!!Author's Response: Thanks. I'm finding this bit of the story very hard to write cause everytime I get close to them being together it just doesn't feel right. I know it's been a long time coming, but I want to do it right, so hopefully you won't have to wait too much longer for their relationship to move on.
Thanks for reviewing and please keep on reading. x Report Review
Oh my god how does Draco react to that?!? You wrote this chapter amazingly well--the fact you added in so many details about Professor Babbage's (I actually believe it's Burbage, though) death in Deathly Hallows really makes the emotions rise and make the readers (me at least) feel connected to Draco as he's describing it. Please update again soon, loving all of the tension between Draco and Hermione and all of their mixed feelings! :)Author's Response: Yeah sorry about that. When I was writing it I knew it wasn't quite right and I didn't have access to my books to check. I meant to check it before I submitted the chapter. You will notice that it has been promptly changed. I really hate making mistakes so thanks for pointing that out so I could change it quickly.
Well you will have to wait and see. Although it may not be Draco's reaction that you have to worry about. (wee hint for the next chapter) ; )
But yes I do think it's important that we know why Draco has changed and we know from the films how he felt about Voldemort being in his house and how he felt about Profesor Burbage (see I've learned) so I do hope that people do start to see his in a slightly better light. x Report Review
I am absolutely loving this story so far, and look forward to the chapters to come! Thanks for a great read!Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing. Yeah I'm looking forward to writing the coming chapters. I think they will be pretty interesting. Thanks for reading and I hope you like what's to come. x Report Review
Amazing! You are such a good writer! Can't wait to read more keep up the amazing work! :)Author's Response: Hey thank so much for reading and reviewing. Thanks so much for your lovely comments. I get seriosuly paranoid about my writing and the story so I love hearing that people are liking it.
Chapter 16 should be up shortly, so please keep reading and I hope you review again. x Report Review
PLEASE rite more,this is my favorite story,so i want to read more!i love the twist at the end,makes it all the more interesting.i'm waiting. best regards,noori.Author's Response: Don't worry you won't have to wait for too much longer, Chapter 16 has been posted so just a few more days and you should have it and I'm actually half way through chapter 17 so another week or so and that should be posted too (well I hope anyway).
So thanks again for reviewing and seriously thanks for saying this is your favourite story. I love writing it and it sounds cheesy saying it all the time, but the reviews are what keep me motivated, so thanks for sticking with me and I hope the new chapter doesn't disappoint. x Report Review
I love this so much! Please keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks so much. I am definitely still writing. Managing to find the time amongst all the craziness of work but I love this story so I will finish it. Next chapter hopefully getting uploaded soon. Just got some little bits to tweak but pretty much done.
Thanks so much for reviewing and please keep reviewing. x Report Review
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