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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LittleLionGirl Katie

16th September 2012:
Another cute short Dearie. I cant wait to see more of these :)
XOXOX,
LLG

Author's Response: thank you - Hannah coming soon, and then Angelina. xxx

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Review #2, by sillylion Hermione

13th September 2012:
Wow lovely two shorts. I hope you write more of them :)

Author's Response: Thank you - I have one waiting to go through, and another one that I've written on Hannah Abbott. Thanks again for reading! x

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Review #3, by XsexdrugsandharrypotterX Hermione

3rd September 2012:
Hey, this was great! I loved your descriptions and the richness of your language here. It wasnt a long piece but obviously you have put lots of thought into the intricacies of this wedding! Who's getting married next? Also, loved Harry and Ginny's wedding! I actually liked Ginny and Dean, so the mention was nice, and it was a nice bit of storytelling, with a good overview of the relationship. I think a little more detail would have been nice, but ho-hum, it was pretty anyway. I guess if you do a Harry piece, it's ok. I was wandering if you were doing a Luna/Rolf wedding? Would be interesting. I liked the dresses for both girls, thought they suited the personalities of the girls really well, and that Hermione's in particular sounded lovely! I found the fact that Ron and Hermione's wedding was bigger than Harry and Ginny's interesting. Was that harry's idea? I would like to find out. There were a couple of mistakes in there, but I won't go on too much.

I am planning on writing my own fanfics and making a proper account so I will probably be back to review next bit, but until then I don't know what I'll call myself. I want to write Hogwarts stories, romances mostly. They might be 17+ though...

Good story so far, at the moment I call myself

XsexdrugsandharrypotterX

Author's Response: Thanks - your stories sound interesting. Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a detailed review. Next chapter is up soon - Katie.

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Review #4, by bri_5_stars Ginny: Happy Ending

10th May 2012:
Meep! This is a very cute moment, and you've got a lot of potential I think. You've got all of the elements of a good one shot/story, it just seems like it could use a little pizzazz or heart. The descriptions are great, its just a bit more telling than showing. We don't need to know each and every guest, or every bit of the past; just anything that is essential to setting the wedding scene. I found no spelling errors, and nothing that stuck out on the grammar front, to which I must say 'bravo'! Anywho, I hope that didn't sound mean. Good job, and happy writings in the next weddings!
-bri

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm actually in the process of writing a 'Harry' piece with more about the actual wedding in it. I didn't really like it either (a little editing to be done, I think!) Thanks so much for reviewing and I'd love to take a look at some of your own work! x

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Review #5, by Grakmole Ginny: Happy Ending

29th January 2012:
Aaaw so cute please write more

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm actually writing some more pieces at the minute as I have other stories on the go but I will update this soon. Thanks again! xxx

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Review #6, by Mysterious Ginny: Happy Ending

28th January 2012:
Amazing! Could have said a bit more about the wedding and the after party though! And were Ron and Neville best men? That would have been cool!

Author's Response: Thank you 4 the lovely review. I am actually in the process of writing Harry's view of the wedding, which will focus more on the actual wedding. Please feel free 2 read more of my stories. Your input really helped xxx

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