This was a really sweet story and I really liked it.
I loved how Fleur had only talked to Bill for an hour and she knew he was "the one", how she knew she loved him almost straight away. I also thought it was really sweet how when Bill was late, she would be willing to wait longer for him. It really did show just how much she loved him. I really enjoyed them telling the other how much they loved them, and the kiss was great. It was my favourite part of the story.
This was really well written and I loved it. Keep writing! 10/10!Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much!!! I am so glad you enjoyed it, ad thanks you ever so much for the lovely review!! Report Review
Aw, that was a super cute one-shot! I liked how it was Valentine's Day based, so it was an awesome time to post it! Although it was a bit short, i still think you did a great job writing it! Keep writing!
-RavenclawWayToBeAuthor's Response: Thanks so much, I am glad you liked it! I had intended for it to be longer, but it just seemed complete like it is. Thank you for your review! Report Review
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