7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by R.Morgan Something's Out There and Puzzles

9th March 2013:
I think that your portrayal of Remus is very good, better than some others I have read. Bloom is also a lovely character and I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading this story! I'm glad you enjoy it. Unfortunately there have been a lot of setbacks including the accidental deletion of a couple of nearly complete chapters. I'll try to put up another as soon as possible.

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Review #2, by rogovjm Train Ride part 1

7th August 2012:
This seems really interesting but I'd just like to say that you should start a new paragraph when someone is about to talk. It makes reading a lot easier to follow.

Author's Response: I do seem to have a problem with that sometimes. I get a little better at that every chapter I write... hope you enjoy the rest of the story so far.

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Review #3, by CAD Studying, Makeovers, and Decisions to be Made

16th March 2012:
i am LOVING this story!
can't wait for the next chapter!!


Author's Response: Great to hear that you like my story. I'm battling some serious writers block at the moment but will hopefully update soon. Thanks!

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Review #4, by LaMont Train Ride part 2

13th February 2012:
OMG This is really good!

Author's Response: thanks, The next chapter is waiting for validation, so check back in, in a few days!

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Review #5, by marauders4everr Train Ride part 2

11th February 2012:
Ooh I like the beginning of this. I just wish the chapters were longer so I wouldn't have to wait so long for the next chapter. I like it a lot though!

Author's Response: I've been a bit slack on length, but I'll work on it, I hope to send in the next chapter this weekend, thanks for reviewing

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Review #6, by marauders4everr Train Ride part 1

3rd February 2012:
Wow, this seems really interesting. You don't see fan fictions like this very often. Please update soon, or I will die. I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I look forward to hearing more from you as I update, I'll try to add a chapter a week, hopefully. Thank so much for the feedback!

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Review #7, by mallory f. Train Ride part 1

29th January 2012:
I really liked it! It creates a good balance between your story and the actual story. It also contains great skills of strong writing and detail. I also loved how you had it from both Bloom's point of view and Remus's. Great work, keep going!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and for thinking my writings worth reading. I really appreciate the feedback.

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