This is different from anything I have read so far; different is great! I did feel kind of like it was a little rushed in some places. This seems like a lot to happen in so short a time. Just relax and enjoy creating your story at your own pace.
I look forward to seeing what happens next! ^_^
Happy writing!Author's Response: I totally agree with your suggestion. I was just worried that people would get bored with it, but now I'm going to work on making it not so rushed.
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. It means a lot to me :) Report Review
Omg I luv it! Please keep writing!Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! The next chapter is already written and will be up in a few days once it gets verified :)
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