Neville D: I literally was tearing up at that part! I love Neville so much. Great chapter though!Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, that part of the chapter was horrible, Neville will be missed from this story. Report Review
Wow! This was really good, not the normal 'pregnancy twist' i loved it! Please update soon :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, another chapter has just been validated. Report Review
I love this story. It isn't the usual 'pregnancy' fic or scorose but it is very good. The grammar is good and character development also fantastic well done!Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I tried to make the pregnancy part of the story a little bit of a twist. Report Review
Fantastic chapter, I'm glad Dominque and Scorpius are together now :)Author's Response: Yes, I completely agree! Report Review
Uhoh! it's got to be Scorpius!
And good on Roxanne for yelling at Dom, I can't believe she got that drunk.
And oh no the girls have found out, that's not going to be good at all!
A very interesting and good chapter!Author's Response: Dominique is very confused as to who it was. And yeah, Roxanne is the more mature friend, whereas Daniella is the more comforting friend. Thankyou! Report Review
She's getting drunk! I wonder who that guy is at the end? Part of me thinks that it's not Jason.
And Jason is so sweet giving Dom that gift.
I can't wait to read what's going to happen the next day!Author's Response: Yes Jason was very sweet. And I know, Dominique was so careless. Report Review
Yay! they said they loved each other!
And Scorpius was being romantic, I wonder if she'll be returning his feelings anytime soon?Author's Response: Yes, a very romantic chapter! Report Review
Yes Dom and Jason are going out!
I can't believe Scorpius thought that they were going out, although I was holding out hope that they would be at some point. I felt sorry for Scorpius catching them kissing though.Author's Response: Yeah I know! And Scorpius didn't think they were going out, he just thought that Dominique liked him. Yeah I felt sorry for him too! Report Review
I'm liking the talk of Jason, I think that maybe him and Dom will get together :-D
And James is cute with Jacqueline bless them!
Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Yes, yes, lots of relationships! They really are cute together! Report Review
It's good to see that rivallries and pureblood pride is still around. Although I feel sorry for Scorpius trying to get comfort from Dom and having his mother screaming at him.
It's so sad that Draco done that, I wonder what made him do it?
At least Dom has found a distraction though :-DAuthor's Response: Yes, Astoria seems to be changing personalites. I suppose Draco did that from all the pressure he was under from everyone. He couldn't leave the house or anything without somebody trying to murder him. I mean, he helped kill Albus Dumbledore, who wouldn't? And he was depressed because his wrong choices affected his son's life. Draco is a loving father, but he doesn't often reveal that. Report Review
Oh no I wonder what it could be that Astoria said to Scorpius? Could it be Draco? :-S
At least he has Dom there with him though.
And yay for James getting a girlfriend!Author's Response: Yeah, a very sad time for Scorpius and Astoria. James has had a lot of girlfriends though, but yes I'm glad too! Report Review
I like how you've made it so people will be in different dormitories every year, that is a brilliante idea as it gives people a chance to meet other people.
I'm loving the Dom and Scorpius encounters :-D
Off to read the next chapter!Author's Response: Thankyou! Yes I'm enjoying writing the Scorpius and Dominique encounters, haha! Report Review
o Scorpius wants Dom to kiss him? She should have! haha
And I'm not sure if I like Audrey either, especially knowing that she only married Percy for the fame.
I'm really liking this story, it's so sweet.Author's Response: Yes, haha! As you can tell, Scorpius is the flirty type. Thanks. I agree, Audrey is a snobby little witch! Report Review
Poor Scorpius not being able to have a friend over or go see friends, but I see Draco and Astoria's point.
I love how you have their own point of view and then you change it, it flows really well.
Another great chapterAuthor's Response: Thanks, I thought it would give more information if I told it from his point of view, and you can understand his feelings better. Report Review
I'm liking how you introduced Dominique and how she thinks that her brother and sister are prettier then her.
I also like how Fred is scared how Lily doesn't really like them.
A very good first chapter, can't wait to read more.Author's Response: Thankyou! I thought I'd give like an insight of what the Potter and Weasley family was like now. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Report Review
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