I just started reading this fanfic, but im absolutely ADDICTED! When are you posting the next chapter?

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I somehow missed this chapter until now...? SO SORRY! But it was as always really good, interesting and well written! I love her relationship with Adam :) but I'm not sure what do think of him right now. I hope he is one of the good guys... ? :)
and I love that James doesn't seem to be a real Death Eater and I hope he truly isn't evil for real, though I'm not sure yet. I thought the same as Elara, that he's not truly behind it, but you never know, right? well, YOU do, so could you please update soon, so I'll get to know more as well? ;)
I really hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to read more about it!
I've got a small question: about how long do you think this story is going to be? :) really curious :)

As I said: it was a really good chapter! keep up the good work and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really happy you liked it! I'm not sure about the length, maybe 25? Around there somewhere probably. I'll try and update soon, school and work seem to be demanding my attention lately, but I'll do my best to have a new chapter up soon(:

Thank you so much for the lovely review!
Claire

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You have a great plot idea but your spelling mistakes are hard to pass over. I feel like you're spelling things by how they sound not by how they're actually spelled. And the sequence and placing of some events are not logical at all or very unnatural. And it's weird how the story barely has background and jumps right into trouble with someone from the past :/ It would be cool to see how she dated James and the hijinks that she had to go through to date him and then built up to your plot.

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Love et. You are amazing.

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Awesome story! I liked the James pov and it wasn't too girly;) I can totally see James as an angsty teen trying to rebel against his too perfect father that he can't live up to and somehow managing to get caught in some dangerous stuff... Short way of saying that is that I agree with the whole death eater thing working for the story:) keep writing!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy I'm not the only one who saw James as a rebellious teen!
Thank you for reviewing!

With Love,
Claire

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That was truly unexpected! Most stories are very cliche and if there not i can usually tell where there going, but with this chapter I was caught completly off guard! Which is a good thing!

The last thing I want is to be bored in a story, and I feel like with where your taking it, I will forever be entertained and shocked :)

I think this is actually pretty believable too. It's like an extreme 'I have a rich daddy and am so misunderstood' situation and it makes sense to me that one of Harrys kids would rebel against the pressure of being the saviours son.

Okay I feel like this review is super long, but I just wanted to say I love where your going with this and can't wait for the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You have no idea how worried I was about people not liking this chapter! And the fact that you think it's believable (which some people thought it wasn't), means the world to me! THANK YOU!!!

With love,
Claire

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Oh wow that was unexpected, I don't know what to think of it yet haha but I think it will be a great story and lots of interesting things are bound to happen. i can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yeah, the next couple chapters are going to be interesting ones. Thanks for the review, I'll try and update soon!!! :)

~Claire

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I hate it! That James is a death eather.
I love everything Else about the story. Can't James just be deep undercover? Like snape was?
I don't belive James Would willingly participate in killing innocent people!!!

Author's Response: I'm really sorry that you hate it. And you need to remember that before Snape was undercover he was a fully fledged Death Eater. And I truly think that only JK. Rowling would know what James would really be like, but I respect your opinion, and I get where you're coming from.

And it never mentioned that James has killed anybody, it only says "all the peoples whose lives I ruined". So, you never know what that could mean!
Keep reading if you want, I would be thrilled if you did, but if you don't want to, I understand. :)

~Claire

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Hey! So I think this is the first time I've reviewed your story, and I've really enjoyed it so far! However, I have to say that to me it doesn't at all make sense for James to be a death eater. It's just not very believable in my opinion, but I totally respect how you just took the idea and ran with it, and I also love that you incorporated James having a massive secret to counterbalance Elara's. Looking forward to reading more!

Kat :)

Author's Response: Thank you for telling me it's "unbelievable". And I'm happy you like it so far (other then the Death Eater thing), I would consider changing the Death Eater thing but to many people like it. So I'm just going to continue on the path that I'm on, I just hope you're there with me. :)

Next chapter will be up soon!

~Claire


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wow this story just got so much better! loved this chapter, was sad when it ended!

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'll try and update soon!!!

~Claire

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James is a Death Eater?!?! This just got serious. And Elara's on a mission to capture him, epic. Love is getting in the way and I have no idea how this will turn out :) I can guess that there'll be some more huge twists though :)

I liked James POV. He didn't seem girly when thinking about Elara, but maybe just a tad too sappy. He is very sweet :)

Author's Response: Yeah, a lot more twists to go before the end. And I'll take the sappiness into account if I do a James POV again. :) Thanks for reading!!

~Claire

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OMG!



I can't say anything else. really. I'm speechless.



Oh God, James is a Death Eater. Oh God. no. What?!



So, I'm calm now. (calmer really. after that chapter I'll never be calm again while reading this story.) I LOVED it! so surprising and interesting and... whoaa. I can't wait for an update. or rather the end of the story so I know what's going to happen. But the next chapter is fine as well ;)

Amazing work! Keep it up and update soon, please! :)

Author's Response: Oh, THANK GOD YOU LIKED IT!! I was so worried no one would like it, it was a bit of a surprise. :)
But I'm happy you like it! lol And I'll update soon!!

~Claire

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Good fic, I'm looking forward to more!!
Though I wonder why James can't know about Elaras secret, but Teddy can.

Author's Response: You're going to find out more about that next chapter. Thanks for reading!

~Claire

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oh wow, now teddy and harry know!!! this is getting big! i can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! And agreed, wow. lol
I'll update as soon as I can!

~Claire

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Oh wow David!! This is really interesting, I wonder if something will happen between them! But I want her to be together with James

Author's Response: lol Thank you for reading! And I'm afraid you will be left to wonder until the next chapter. ;)

~Claire

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Good start, the story seems interesting, I'm continuing now.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!! :D

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no reviews on this chapter yet? weird. :)
So I'll be the first review on this chapter! yaay ;) It was, as always, awesome and freaking amazing!! I love this story and I especially loved this chapter! so many unexpected twists. I can't wait for an update! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't originally planning to have Teddy and Harry find out before James, but it just seemed to fit. Next chapter we will find out a lot about Elara's job, and a lot of other stuff!
Keep reading!

~Claire

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Hey keep posing loving it

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll update as soon as the next chapter is done!! :D

~Claire

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i stopped reading when you used the wrong there/their/they're.

Author's Response: Thanks for telling me why you stopped reading! But I just want to point out that this is a site where anyone can post HPFF, so you should expect people to make mistakes. Maybe if you read a little further you would have found you liked the story, or not.
Thanks again, I'll go over the chapter and fix it. :)

~Claire

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David or James?? Awesome chapter!

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Another Awesome chapter!!

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Awesome Idea! So original!

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I quite like your story, it's interesting and in looking forward to seeing how it all progresses, the only problem I found was that some of your spelling and grammar was off. Good work otherwise :)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm happy you like it. As for grammar and spelling, I usually post the story and then go over grammar and spelling.
Thanks again!
~Claire

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Great! I don't usually read stories under 10 chapters, but it caught my attention and boy was I surprised. Most people don't read stories without a cover, so I recomend you to ask someone to make you one. Lovin' the story!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading it, I'm happy it caught your eye! As for a banner, I have been trying to get someone to make me one. Thanks again, and I'm so happy you like it so far!
~Claire

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wow, I loved this chapter! :) and the plot of the story as well, it's so exciting that most things about her is a secret who is yet to be found out :D and I'm really curious how James will react to everything, I'd guess with a lot of drama ;)
But I really hope Elara won't have a thing or something with David, that'd be horrible.
as said, great work! I can NOT wait for an update! love it!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so happy you like it! James' reaction will most definitely be interesting, I can promise you that. As for Elara having a "thing" with David, well lets just say that is for me to know and for you to find out! Thanks again for the lovely review!
~Claire

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