Just wanted to tell you this is absolutely magnificent and I adore this story. You know, usually when people try to write this kind of stories they end up simple and boring, but I find this story takes a deeper insight in James and Lily's relationship than those "wannabe good writers". And I've read a lot of stories and I mean hundreds and hundreds and I have to say that I'm impressed. Keep up the good work and don't make any easy solutions. Like Dumbledore said the easy path might not always be the right one. ;))
I feel like a true reviewer because I managed to put a quote there to prove my point. Oh, the power I feel. :DDAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I can promise you Lily will not be taking the easy way out despite what any one tells her to do. I am currently working on the next 2 chapters and they should be put up for verification this week. Thank you so much for your review totally made my day! thanks for the quote too! Report Review
I know I just left a review... but I thought I would leave yet another one :)
Another really good chapter- as always! I just hope that Lily understands that she should tell Dumbledore- or someone- soon.
Jess :)Author's Response: You are so sweet! Lily is starting to see what she needs to do she is just scared. I am working on the next chapter right now and it should be up hopefully Monday! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Found this story today. Its really good!
It deals with a really difficult subject, and you have written it very well!
Jess :)Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm glad you think I have written it well! I have first hand experience with violence in a relationship and want people to realize that it is a problem and no matter what always speak up. Lily is having trouble doing that. but she has a long journey still. Thanks again for reading and your review! Report Review
aaw james and lily bonding moment :) just checked up on the story and i spotted you had updated, another brilliant chapter! cant wait for the next :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I will be updating the story tonight or early morning. I have SO many ideas on it! I'm glad you are enjoying it!!! Thanks so much and keep your eye out for chapter "The Awakening" lol
This is a different take to James/Lily, but it's still really good! Please write more soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I am finishing the next chapter up right now and it should be in the que tonight or early morning. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. :) HL Report Review
This was brilliant! I love Lily already, and I hate JT! How dare he be mean to Lily! I cant wait for your nect update already! This story seems so good already (:Author's Response: Thanks so much, I have this entire story planned exactly!!! Its a good one trust me :) Ill be updating this coming week keep your eye out :) Thanks for the review!
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