Just wanted to tell you this is absolutely magnificent and I adore this story. You know, usually when people try to write this kind of stories they end up simple and boring, but I find this story takes a deeper insight in James and Lily's relationship than those "wannabe good writers". And I've read a lot of stories and I mean hundreds and hundreds and I have to say that I'm impressed. Keep up the good work and don't make any easy solutions. Like Dumbledore said the easy path might not always be the right one. ;)) I feel like a true reviewer because I managed to put a quote there to prove my point. Oh, the power I feel. :DDAuthor's Response: Thank you so much for your review! I can promise you Lily will not be taking the easy way out despite what any one tells her to do. I am currently working on the next 2 chapters and they should be put up for verification this week. Thank you so much for your review totally made my day! thanks for the quote too! Report Review
Hey! I know I just left a review... but I thought I would leave yet another one :) Another really good chapter- as always! I just hope that Lily understands that she should tell Dumbledore- or someone- soon. Update Soon! Jess :)Author's Response: You are so sweet! Lily is starting to see what she needs to do she is just scared. I am working on the next chapter right now and it should be up hopefully Monday! Thanks for the review! Report Review
Hi! Found this story today. Its really good! It deals with a really difficult subject, and you have written it very well! Update Soon Jess :)Author's Response: Thanks so much I'm glad you think I have written it well! I have first hand experience with violence in a relationship and want people to realize that it is a problem and no matter what always speak up. Lily is having trouble doing that. but she has a long journey still. Thanks again for reading and your review! Report Review
aaw james and lily bonding moment :) just checked up on the story and i spotted you had updated, another brilliant chapter! cant wait for the next :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I will be updating the story tonight or early morning. I have SO many ideas on it! I'm glad you are enjoying it!!! Thanks so much and keep your eye out for chapter "The Awakening" lol Report Review
This is a different take to James/Lily, but it's still really good! Please write more soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks for the comment. I am finishing the next chapter up right now and it should be in the que tonight or early morning. I'm glad you are enjoying it so far. :) HL Report Review
This was brilliant! I love Lily already, and I hate JT! How dare he be mean to Lily! I cant wait for your nect update already! This story seems so good already (:Author's Response: Thanks so much, I have this entire story planned exactly!!! Its a good one trust me :) Ill be updating this coming week keep your eye out :) Thanks for the review! Report Review
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