Great story! Read it again 'cos I forgot what happened since last time. Is it just me or does everyone fancy Remus. The girls straightening up and fixing their hair when he's around. interesting. Love your story, please keep writing!!
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!
P.S. I hope James gets better! Report Review
Hello, everybody! Just wanted to apologise for the long wait, we have had some beta problems. Thanks for staying patient. Report Review
It Seems Like Its Gonna Be A Good Story :) I Love How Forward Lexi Was At The End Of The Chapter Too
The Whole Incident With Snape Was After OWLs In Their Fifth Year And Perfects Would Have Already Been Chosen Before That So I Was A Little Bit Confused But Other Than That Its Looking Good :) xAuthor's Response: Thanks a bunch for your review! Yeah, we understand the whole Snape incident was in 5th year even though we made it this year. It has to do a lot with whats to come in the story. Also, about your confusion, this is there 5th year. There was a small little flashback to the end of finals when the Snape thing took place. We will update soon! Report Review
Love Remus and Riley!!
Keep up the good work!!
padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!Author's Response: Thanks! It really means a lot to have this review! We will try to update reallly soon but we have midterms right now :( You just received a cyber-cookie, enjoy!! Riley and Remus are cute, aren't they. You'll will see more backstory to Riley soon to come (as you know Remus already). If you wouldn't mind, I have a song fic coming out in the queue and I would love to know your opinion on it. It should be out any day and its called "Neville's Last Song". Thanks a bunch for your review! Report Review
I honestly loved this fanfic. As a first chapter, it sets up the story beautifully in preparation for a bigger plot, makes all of the characters' personalities clear, and provides a perfect look into the world of the Marauders. I think the intricate web of relationships portrayed is an excellent reflection of the lives of real-life teenagers , and I can't wait to see what happens next. Fantastic job.Author's Response: Awww, thanks! We will try to update soon. I really appreciate the review! Oh, and Ali99 will be writing the next chapter! Report Review
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