Oh my goodness...This is brilliant! I love it! This was short, but so thought out, emotional, and eye catching.
I really liked how you explained the background after Remus was born instead of before. I also really like how you described why he was being adopted and why she had chosen who she did. It was heart wrenching and I had tears in my eyes. This was simply beautiful!
I thought you also took two tough subjects and handled them well I haven't read a story on here about adoption or miscarriage. So this was a real treat to be able to read something so different.
I also liked the last line...it was kind of creepy and it gave that sense of foreboading for what lays ahead for Remus.
I am adding this to my favorites!! Keep up the awesome writing!! =)
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This is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter Report Review
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