I really like it! You've got a great plot and I can't wait to see what else happens to Emma and her friends (and cousins). The concept is really interesting!
There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes, nothing too major, but just something you might want to look over. And there could be more description. I love what you've got, but there could be so much more!
Your characters are great, really vivid. I can't wait for more interaction between Rose and Scorpius and Emma and Albus. Is Emma really in love with Al? I can't wait for more! Looking for an update soon, I hope! =) Report Review
Hey! Nice beginning! I like the name Echo :)Author's Response: Thanks :) and I really like the name Echo too :D Report Review
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