AHHH! I'm crying!! So sad! So well written though! You painted such a vivid picture and I could feel the raw emotions. I love how you made such memorable moments of his life flash before his eyes and I especially love that you included Angelina. I almost wish it had been longer, but of course we all know that it happened way too quickly. Great job on this one! Report Review
That was morbid! But good! It was sad to read about Fred's death (As I'm pretty sure that's who it was :P ). Thanks for entering and hopefully the results will be up soon!
Mike. Report Review
That is so sad :( It must be awful loosing your own twin as you would be so connected to them :(
One thing made me cringe though...the stuff about his injuries ahaha I don't have a strong stomach :P
I loved how he could tell were his family were beside him!
Well done :D
~BlameItOnThe NarglesAuthor's Response: Oops. Haha, it just needed a bit more..reality? I suppose. A whole chapter of canon memories would be a bit much, you know? :')
Thanks again! :)
Lovely doing this swap. Report Review
This is AMAZING.
Just write as the narrator next time, cuz I guy doesn't give so much detail. D; BUT LOVE IT.Author's Response: Haha, thanks Alina.
I don't really know what you mean, because Fred dies, and Fred tells it. Report Review
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