I love how you made all the characters we know Dorcas's adopted family. It's sweet to see how she loves all of them. And McGonagall as a mum? Never saw that coming! I'm curious to see Dorcas as a guy though... I still don't fully understand that part of the plot yet. I know you were reading my story Love Me Tender a while back, and there are 18 chapters now! If you have time, feel free to check out what I've added! This was a great chapter! 10/10
Cassie :)Author's Response: OMG! i'm... out of words really!
it's amazing, when people that you admire for their writing skills, tell you that you're a decent piece of work too!
thank A LOT! you don't know how much this one review can boost my morale!
and about the story... i'm going through exams right now (it's a right hell hole) but i'll be back as soon as it all finishes!
promise! Report Review
I said I'd leave you a review! At first I sat there reading your summary like okay I get it, I think but it confused me haha. This won't be long cus I'm on my phone and its about 1 am and I have college tomorrow.
But what do you mean I wouldn't find it interesting? It's great so far. You went right into the story like POW and didn't do one of those intro paragraphs that annoy me sometimes.
And Minevra and you could sorta know her thoughts but it wasn't direct, as if first person. I liked it anyways. Some of her thoughts made me smile and giggle.
Omg I love Dumbledore!!! I always think he's a character that's awkward to write, but you got it hun! And his bond with Dorcus is so lovely :)
This whole power and gifted thing with her is really interesting and I really wanna read more. Now I.can pressure you to update! Yeah, I wanna read more :D
This is your first story? You wouldn't think it, its great, the way its written ans the Lil plot you got forming.
- Kels xAuthor's Response: KELC!
OMFG! oh, gimme a minute to teach myself how to breathe again...
ok, i'm stable! ;)
who cares if you've got college and you can't write for long, hell, even getting a review from an amazing author like you is AMAZING!
yeah, i know.. intro's annoy me too so i figured i wouldn't torture any reader that might happen to stumble across the story.. :D
I MADE YOU GIGGLE AT MINERVA FREAKING MCGONAGALL'S THOUGHTS!
i love Dumbledore too so i couldn't help thinking of him as a father figure and that's how the plot came to me... well, maybe the fact that i watched a lot of Mulan when i was a kid helped me along to. :)
i'm glad you find it interesting, and as you might have guessed, i'm really over-whelmed to find a review from you... and a positive one at that...
thank you, and i think you just gave me the will to get typing!
Wow i Love your story I cant wait for more of it to comeAuthor's Response: aww.. thank you! Report Review
I really like your story so far! Update soon, pleaseAuthor's Response: thanx A LOT! :) and i'll try my best to do that! Report Review
Your writing is amazing, you must continue with this story...Author's Response: i'm really happy you think so... and i'll be continuing, no doubt! ;)
I honestly don't know what to think... It is soo different to any other story i've read before... i think i will keep on reading.
9/10;)Author's Response: the fact that you thought the story was worth continuing to read is enough in MY books! thanx a LOT for that! Report Review
Hi this is a great story please add more chapters soonAuthor's Response: why, thank you! :) Report Review
I really like the start if this story! The summary really drew me in, and I can't wait to read more!it's really interesting, because it's like what happens to Harry, but the baby is a girl and is raised by someone who loves her. I'm really intrigued, and want to know the outcome of these circumstances! 10/10
Cassie :)Author's Response: awww.. thanx a lot! you don't how much the grey box at the end of the story page can effect the writers.. you totally made my day and gave me an insane urge to update soon, even if it kills me.. :)
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This is so cute!!! I love Dorcas!!! I can't wait to read an update and see where the story goes, I mean obviously she is disguised as a boy, but this seems adorable:) Can't wait to read more:)Author's Response: OMG!
my VERY FIRST REVIEWER!
if you haven't noticed yet, i'd like to tell ya that i'm super excited to see a review..and that too, so soon! =D
i've always read writers saying how reviews make their day but i never fully understood, until now!
ok, so i shud stop rambling now.
thanx for liking dorcas... i'll try to update soon! =)
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