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Review #1, by hplover987 Prologue; Epousal

30th April 2012:
Hey Fanna!

I said I'd leave you a review! At first I sat there reading your summary like okay I get it, I think but it confused me haha. This won't be long cus I'm on my phone and its about 1 am and I have college tomorrow.

But what do you mean I wouldn't find it interesting? It's great so far. You went right into the story like POW and didn't do one of those intro paragraphs that annoy me sometimes.

And Minevra and you could sorta know her thoughts but it wasn't direct, as if first person. I liked it anyways. Some of her thoughts made me smile and giggle.

Omg I love Dumbledore!!! I always think he's a character that's awkward to write, but you got it hun! And his bond with Dorcus is so lovely :)

This whole power and gifted thing with her is really interesting and I really wanna read more. Now I.can pressure you to update! Yeah, I wanna read more :D

This is your first story? You wouldn't think it, its great, the way its written ans the Lil plot you got forming.

Keep writing!

- Kels x

Author's Response: KELC!
OMFG! oh, gimme a minute to teach myself how to breathe again...
ok, i'm stable! ;)
who cares if you've got college and you can't write for long, hell, even getting a review from an amazing author like you is AMAZING!
yeah, i know.. intro's annoy me too so i figured i wouldn't torture any reader that might happen to stumble across the story.. :D
i love Dumbledore too so i couldn't help thinking of him as a father figure and that's how the plot came to me... well, maybe the fact that i watched a lot of Mulan when i was a kid helped me along to. :)
i'm glad you find it interesting, and as you might have guessed, i'm really over-whelmed to find a review from you... and a positive one at that...
thank you, and i think you just gave me the will to get typing!
extremely grateful,

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Review #2, by Gracie Dreams and Reunions

29th April 2012:
Wow i Love your story I cant wait for more of it to come

Author's Response: aww.. thank you!

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Review #3, by Sawyer Dreams and Reunions

21st April 2012:
I really like your story so far! Update soon, please

Author's Response: thanx A LOT! :) and i'll try my best to do that!

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Review #4, by Chesh Dreams and Reunions

20th April 2012:

Your writing is amazing, you must continue with this story...

Author's Response: i'm really happy you think so... and i'll be continuing, no doubt! ;)

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Review #5, by Chesh Prologue; Epousal

20th April 2012:
I honestly don't know what to think... It is soo different to any other story i've read before... i think i will keep on reading.

Author's Response: the fact that you thought the story was worth continuing to read is enough in MY books! thanx a LOT for that!

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Review #6, by Gemma Dreams and Reunions

19th April 2012:
Hi this is a great story please add more chapters soon

Author's Response: why, thank you! :)

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Review #7, by Skyler315 Prologue; Epousal

5th February 2012:
This is so cute!!! I love Dorcas!!! I can't wait to read an update and see where the story goes, I mean obviously she is disguised as a boy, but this seems adorable:) Can't wait to read more:)

Author's Response: OMG!
if you haven't noticed yet, i'd like to tell ya that i'm super excited to see a review..and that too, so soon! =D
i've always read writers saying how reviews make their day but i never fully understood, until now!
ok, so i shud stop rambling now.
thanx for liking dorcas... i'll try to update soon! =)
levicorpus'ed into the air,

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