Reading Reviews for A Little Bundle of Joy
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Review #1, by Ed November day

19th September 2016:
Re-edit again and check spelling!

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Review #2, by victoria_anne November day

28th March 2016:
Hi Christina!

What a sweet little one-shot you have here!

Hm, a "bad stomach flu", eh? I think not, Lily! Her reaction when she found out was exciting and sweet to read! It must have been nerve-wracking for her to imagine telling James. It was clearly quite unexpected for them!

Pizza and breadsticks are amazing - dinner at the Potters' sounds delicious!

Aw I forget sometimes that Lily and Alice were pregnant at the same time! Oh no, James was out celebrating it, ha ha! How cheeky of him to come staggering in at midnight, albeit a bit rude to keep Lily waiting! (Do you think she'd mind if I grabbed a breadstick?)

Sirius was definitely right about that! Just wait until Lily is big and swollen and sore! He and James will have to be on their best behaviour for sure!

By the way, HPFF is hosting a fundraiser at the moment, and I hope you consider donating to help keep the magic or fan fiction alive!

♥ B

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Review #3, by A Reader November day

14th January 2016:
Good concept, but writing is horrendous

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