Reading Reviews for Edge of Desire
  
6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Calypso  Something New

5th July 2012:
Oh dear I love Ron and Hermione way too much :P
This was really sweet. I thought that they both seemed very in character, especially Ron, who came across wonderfully. I also liked what the trio and gone on to do after the war with Harry doing all the official stuff and Hermione going to find her parents etc.
You set the scene beautifully- I loved the description of the Burrow with the flowers left dying on the table. It felt very real.
I felt that the place you left the characters at the end was really good too, with all that hope for their future :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the incredibly kind response. I really appreciate you taking the time to read my little short story :)

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Review #2, by Avanell 2 Something New

27th January 2012:
very cute story on how they decided to 'seal the deal' ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it! I really love Ron and Hermione together. Thanks so much for the review, it totally made my day :)

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Review #3, by CassiePotter Something New

22nd January 2012:
Since you reviewed my story, I thought I'd return the favor. I really loved this story! It captured Ron and Hermione really well post-war. They are still themselves, yet they have matured, and it's important to show that. 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I tried to keep them as true-to-character as I could because their personalities match perfectly in an odd sort of way :)

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Review #4, by Starkidgleek Something New

22nd January 2012:
I love this little story about what happened after the battle! You really sounded proffesional! you should write more stories. You are a really good writer, and I would enjoy reading more of your work!
~Starkidgleek

Author's Response: Aww, that is so sweet of you to say so! I had fun writing this, so I will definitely try to write a few different things.

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Review #5, by Ginger Lust Something New

21st January 2012:
I really liked your story. It's well written. I also look forward to more stries from you.

Author's Response: Thank you! That really means a lot to me. I am currently working on a short story too and the first chapter should be up in a few days.

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Review #6, by Ffion Something New

21st January 2012:
I really liked it ... write more please :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is my first time writing so I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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