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Review #1, by colourfulbonhamcarter Pulling Closer, Pushing Away

15th October 2012:
This story is really good!! Please update!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is in queue, so I hope you will continue to enjoy! Thanks so much for the encouragement!

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Review #2, by Ginnypotter87 Just That Stupid

15th October 2012:
OH MY GOODNESS.
I'll admit the reason I read this story was because the banner had Adam Young on it (SQUEAL) but I actually read this and it's a cute idea. I love stories like this, they're adorable. I'm just going to keep reading and fangirl over Adam (I LOVE HIM.) and read with a huge, creepy smile on my face.

Sorry, I'm a bit off track. It would be awkward if that wasn't Adam Young, but hey, we can't see each other.

I liked this chapter very much but Bellatrix seems a bit less evil. (and creepy.) I suppose that's because they're younger...is this story AU? Sorry, didn't pay much attention to the details.

And, woah. I never imagined people would have crushed on Bellatrix. It feels strange.

Overall, cute plot and you must keep writing. I'll review when I can!

~m

Author's Response: Oh my gosh that's so awesome! Now I am so glad I picked Adam Young to play Jeremy :) You are epic!

And yes, the story is very AU, and Bellatrix does tend to be less evil and creepy, but I will have her end up that way by the time it is time for her to be that way, and yes, you are right about it being because she is younger :)

Thanks so so so much!!! And I will definitely keep writing, this story is my baby right now LOL :) Have a lovely day and thank you for the awesome review!


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Review #3, by Harry and Ginny A Little Problem

8th February 2012:
wow this chapter is awesome! it was funny to see Bella's reaction towards her pregnancy. I can't wait to see what Jeremy will do next to show to Bella that he does love her! update soon please!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Aw thanks! I literally wrote this chapter in under a day, so I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

I'm working on chapter three, so whenever it is done, I shall post it. Hope you continue to enjoy it! :)


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Review #4, by The_seeker12 Just That Stupid

5th February 2012:
Interesting idea. And for never having written Bellatrix before- very good job!

She's a hard character to write, and I think you pulled it off nicely. Can't wait to read more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I've been so busy lately, but I just finshed chapter two and three is being written, so...hpe you like them equally, and I'm glad you think I got her right :)

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Review #5, by Harry and Ginny Just That Stupid

23rd January 2012:
this fic seems very interesting! I never read a story about Bellatrix so I just had to read this one! this chapter is really good and I can't wait to read the next chapter!^_^

10/10

Harry and Ginny

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so glad you enjoyed it.

I have to get like three or four challenge oneshots published by their deadlines, but after that, I will try to have a few chapters ready to join the queue whenever they can.

Thank again!!!


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