Reading Reviews for Don't Hold Your Breath
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Review #1, by Jess Rejection of Bacon Sandwiches

4th June 2012:
Great writing as always. I thought the chapter was a little short, but I guess that's how these things go :P
Poor Draco, always stuck in the middle of some sort of conflict. I'm desperately hoping Ron and Hermione don't make up. Nothing against Ron, I just prefer Draco =}

I look forward to your next update!

Author's Response: I'm sorry that it was short, but had I continued the chapter it would have been either really long with a lot of different concepts, or I would have sacrificed the quality.
I prefer Draco to Ron sometimes too. He's more mysterious as a character as he's not focused upon in the books.
I will review soon... I hope. Sorry that it's been so long! =]

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Review #2, by Faith Rejection of Bacon Sandwiches

6th April 2012:
It waz GREAT!i luved it can't wait for the next chapter:)

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I am glad you liked it as I was a little unsure about it.

Thanks for taking the time to review. I appreciate it. Until next time. =]

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Review #3, by inkbutterfly Kissing a Snake

23rd February 2012:
Yay another chapter!
I think that:
- Ron deserves it
- Harry should tell him so, even if it hurts Ron, but nicely
- Hermione needs a friend who is a girl who she can chat to
- GOOD! They didn't like the kiss :'D

But I also decided I would rather Draco than Ron!
Brilliant as always ;)

Oh and I have a new story up that I am excited about and can you please check it out because I wanna know what people thing but I have no reviews :'(

Hehehe, >.<

Love the story ^_^

Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it and reviewed again. It means so much to me =]

The next chapter has a few surprises...I hope you'll like it. Hermione does need a girl friend to talk to...but I put it in on purpose. She can't talk to Ginny she has no one. I wanted it to feel like she was slightly abandoned.

Of course I'll look at your story. =]

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Review #4, by inkbutterfly The Weasel, the Ferret and the Damsel in Distress

21st February 2012:
Drama, drama, drama! Haha!
Oh have I mentioned that I love your story? Because I do, I might have been a bit busy complaining about your choice of couples, bit that just 'cause I'm into it.

Author's Response: Oh yes. Always Drama. The joys of being slightly hotheaded *cough* Ron *cough*

I'm glad you are enjoying it. I know the feeling when you don't want a couple to get together... you have my sincerest apologies! Next chapter is in the queue now.

Thank you again for your lovely reviews. They really have made my day! =]

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Review #5, by inkbutterfly Secret Kisses?

21st February 2012:
Ahhh! I still can't bear the thought of Harry with Hermione! I mean POOR GINNY! Unless conjure up at hot Quidditch player for her... then maybe it will be okay.
And she is so funny drunk, I loved it :')
Plus Malfoy is sexy...


Author's Response: I know...I love a good Harry and Ginny as much as you...but I do like to toy with my characters a little...perhaps a little too much.

I loved writing drunk Hermione! Because in the books we never really see that, it was so much fun to get creative with it!

I do totally agree that Draco is sexy!

Thanks for the review. I really appreciate that you've taken the time to do so. It means a lot. =]

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Review #6, by inkbutterfly Flirtations, Accusations and California

21st February 2012:
:O No! Really? If you want Harry and Hermione, it will have to be very convincingly written...
Malfoy, Ron or Harry... Hm, I don't even know who I would rather she was with.

But its good, massively so.
Good luck and keep going ;)

Author's Response: I know how it will eventually end...but I thought the competitiveness between them would be good...and the different qualities of each of them which attracts Hermione to them would be interesting to explore...though that is coming up in later chapters.

Thank you very much for the positive review. Made my day/night. =]

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Review #7, by inkbutterfly Promotions and Giving Up

21st February 2012:
I like it so far. Probably because Ron is being rather idiotic and I like it when he does that.
Just warning you though, I am not a huge fan of Dramione so, ... just don't over do it.
Good flow and no grammar or spelling mistakes.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far...and as you don't like Dramonie I'm going to assume I'm doing something right... =]

Thank you for the review...and I hope not to disappoint. =]

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