You've written this really well!
Most people who write anorexia are way off but you're right on track!
(Sadly one of my friends has it that's why I know so much about it)
Most people with anorexia don't think they have a problem, they believe they're right and everyone else is wrong. They also like to have control which most people don't believe.
This was a really good story and you wrote it very well :)
There were a few grammatical errors and spelling mistakes but other than that it was really good :) Report Review
For someone who admittedly doesn't actually know what someone goes through during this, you have properly captured the emotion and thinking. And that is the sign of a brilliant writer. Report Review
This was really interesting to read! And it must have been such a challenge to right, I would imagine. I think you did a great job, especially portraying Rose's denial.
I'm actually really glad there's a one-shot like this in the NG archive, when almost everything else is so about love and other typical teenage issues. No one really tackles subjects like this, and I think you did a brilliant job.
10/10, Bea xoAuthor's Response: Thank you so much! I haven't seen an awful lot of these kind of one-shots either, but this just popped into my head one day; I thought Rose would always feel some kind of pressure on her. Thank you for the lovely review! Report Review
I like it! Will definitely continue to read. Report Review
Oh, I love this! Rose seems to realistic, and her whole situation seems to be so realistic. Great job! Report Review
Very pretty, though still maintaining the very disturbing feeling anorexia portrays. Report Review
this was really good! i don't see many stories touching on issues like these so it was like a breath of fresh air. you're a very good writer. :) Report Review
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