I like this. Bellatrix's steadfast faith in Voldemort is so her and the way you write it with her arrogance and her knowing that he will come is so like the Bellatrix we know from the books. I like her contempt and the fact that she has no fear. This is Bellatrix. Report Review
Hi! It is me for your challenge review!
And what a great one-shot! It was definitely worth the struggle to find you a summary you wanted! I love your word choice, the flow and style of this. The shortness gives it a slightly crisp edge and finishes it off well though I was wishing it could be longer as it is so good!Author's Response: Thanks for offering the challenge. There was a struggle, as you well know, but I really like what the line inspired, so thank you so much for making the challenge.
I wanted to do something short and snappy, like the summary. ^_^
-Houlestar Report Review
Almost makes me feel proud of Bellatrix.
I do love her though, and this shows her determination and pride for the Dark Lord.
Yeah, its good :)
Great point of veiw and original.
:)Author's Response: She was fighting for something she really believed in. Even though I might think she's a little crazy (understatement of the year), I want to give her some respect. She did what she had to do, never putting herself before what she believed in (Voldemort). She's always hated those who avoided Azkaban *coughsnapecough* so I tried to put her bitterness in.
Thanks for the review! Report Review
Wow, that was strong. I mean like powerful, like you could feel it while reading. I've never experienced something like this before, you did well here. Really well ;) I have nothing else to say, exept maybe more descriptions would be better as it seems kind of short, but it's still really good. Congrats!Author's Response: I wanted to take you on a journey into an insane woman's head. As Bellatrix would say, "I did what I had to do." From your review I see I was able to do just that. Thanks for letting me know! Report Review
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