I love this chapter! I recently found this story and I really wish there was more so I could keep reading! I want more! I love Rory, she is hilarious, especially with Dom by her side. And the boys! They are also completely hilarious and adorable. I really want to read more so please please please update soon.

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its really good :) ı beg you to write soon i feel i cant wait more :D

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amazing really amazing :) ok i ve just read the first chapter but its really good please write as soon as you can :)

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please update soon you are a really good writer and I love this story

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I really like this story so far keep writing :)

Author's Response: thank for your review- it really means a lot to me! I have about 20% of the third chappie done and it should be up soon!

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Liked all the descriptions!! I can picture what they look like in my head now!! Some British terms (i am NOT British but i have friends that are)
Bloody- use frequently to curse or describe something 
Bleeding- plural or bloody
Slag- slut
Sod- use with sod off and sodding 
Bullocks- butt or balls not entirely sure 
Tosspot- not particularly sure 
Whorebag- given 
Fucktard- given 
Arse- ass used with arseface and arsehole 
Bogey- bogger...shudder
Blimey- used with a suprised or shocked expression 
Blast- used with blasted 
Bugger- a english swear word with no american equivalent
Shag- to have sex or shagging in the process of sex
Bum- kind word for butt or arse 
Daft- stupid 
fancy- to desire something (ie. a girl or other physical object) 
Lou- the bathroom 
knickers- under-where(both boys and girls) 
Snog- to kiss 
All important to use in a story places in Bloody England! (haha i used bloody...hehe) anyway hope this could help!! 
PPG (puygme puff gal!) 

Author's Response: heheheehe thank you sooo much! I will be sure to use them:) I am glad you like it- I personally hate introductions but please know that the story does pick up from here! pretty pleasee with a cherry on top keep reading and reviewing!

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I love it! this story seems like it is well written and has the potential to go anywhere. Update soon!

Author's Response: thank you sooo much for taking the time to read, and furthermore review! Just a couple of words make my day! I am glad you like it and will do:)

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speachless! Your writing is really good and very funny! you have the perfect amount of ironi and you gave me good laugh :D

Author's Response: thank you so much for taking the time to review! I don't really consider myself all that funny but it is good to know I was able to make you laugh! keep reading and reviewing- pretty please:)

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you're really good! It made me laugh! My favourite part was about James, he seems like a interesting charecter. I can't find anything wrong with your brittish, but out of intrest, where are you from? Loved it!! :D

Author's Response: thank you sooo much! I am really glad you like James, as I was a bit nervous about him at first. As I am writing more, his character is developing very nicely and I am happy with him. I am actually an American, but i guess I can attribute my knowledge of British terms to years of reading HP and HPFF! I would personally like to congratulate you on being my first review EVER and you literally made my entire life when I logged on and saw I had a review! thanks for reading and please keep reviewing!

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Wow!! What an awsome start to what could be a truly awsome story, I bet you have loads of great ideas, I can't wait to read them as ypu have startes so well. I think this is the best fanfic i have ever read so you go girl! :) Pleasepleaseplease write more!

Author's Response: oh.my.gosh. I am actually shaking from happiness right now! thankyouthankyouthankyou! I am so glad you like it and took the time to leave such an amazing review! I cannot wait to get my next chapter validated and please keep reading and reviewing! :)

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