Wow! The world is mental I will agree. Report Review
I bet! Heck it does seem interesting! Report Review
Hi this is a really good story, but why did you end the chapter with Dudley saying that the Annie girl was his wife?
it's so good!
10/10Author's Response: Its supposed to end with a cliffhanger Report Review
i like your interesting thingy (and hair) and it's really good story.
:(|)Author's Response: err, thanks Report Review
well you hit some and some you strike out. your first chapter had a good start. you kind of when to hell in a hand basket in this chapter. you went major off course. yes the playful banter is fun (at times)but it end up kind of being stupid. you at time have a full thought and then start writing a another thought with out finishing it. the Binns ,you tryed to make it funny, it did not work. and end up being stupid. sorry but i got to grade you low on this chapter.Author's Response: Well, thank you for your review, and i'll keep that in mind. Report Review
comon update now!1i love this fan fiction it will be exciting please please please plaesaAuthor's Response: aww, thanks! i just got chapter two validated today, so im not sure when the next chapter will be up. but thank you so much for your review!!! Report Review
This sounds so cute! I cannot wait to read more! Please update soon!!Author's Response: Thanks, i've always wanted to do lily potter's p.o.v..and i had a few ideas about heaven too. i have chapters 2 and 3 written, just got to wait for time to post it. thanks! Report Review
So far not bad. There a few thing I think she would be more suprise at that . Please be a bit tastefull about this.but you have a good start:)Author's Response: Yeah, the shock part comes in next chapter.and its a really big shock, so hope you'll continue reading to see! Thanks for your review! Report Review
Brilliant it is funny and interesting please keep writingAuthor's Response: That's the response i was hoping for! Thanks so much, its people like you that inspire me to write!
chp 2 coming soon! Report Review
I think this story will be really...interesting. Will Lily remember who she was? And why is Hermione, Harry's wife? Just wondering. But I really like the first chapter but I would really like to read more, so.get writing! :)Author's Response: well, I really hate writing harry/ginny or ron/hermione, so i just made it hermione and harry.
and they're not married, they're only 16!
full story coming soon!!!
and if you look at the review before/after yours, you can read a bit of next chapter!. Report Review
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