i love this story
please update please!

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please please update soon!

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I love your fic! I cant wait for the next chapter, Im writing one that is called Hidden Secrets were Severus is Harry's father but they find out in Harry's 4th year. But yours is super good! Cant wait for the next chapter Heather Cromwell

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Update soon Please!!!!!

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Please up date soon. I love this story its so cute. I hope to god you up date soon, I'm dying. You have the power, Go for it! =)

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very good. So cute. I so love this. PLEASE update soon its so so so ... Great! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!

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Oh, I forgot. I hate the Dursleys, too. How could they? 'Specially when he turned into a harmless, adorable wolf pup! I'll leave now-- poor little Harry... WRITE MORE!!!!

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I love it! You have so many ideas. But why isn't it finished? I need to finish it! Okay on to my review... I know that you changed a lot of things in the story to make it fit your story, which is good! It makes more sense! Some people switch back and forth which uses up my limited brain power. Just a thought... Harry is really talented, but so is everyone else, and their differences aren't really explained. Like, I know that Harry is an animagus, but why? If he started becoming one unconciously, then how? Well some confusion is healthy, I guess. No omplaints really, just so much is happening and I hope that you continue to be a swarm of ideas (Don't ask about that) at the end of your story. Also, in my opinion, Harry's scar couldn't be covered up with foundation, but you never know, eh? Now a place for all of my positive comments: Severus Snape is so nice! It is so weird. I keep on waiting for him to turn into the evil 'I'm-going-to-glare-and-sneer-soon' guy we remember from the books. But he is really nice! I always new he would be. I think that he should take things a little slowly with Mcgonagalls daughter... he is busy with his son, maybe just unconciously grow closer over their fascination over the boy? Whatever you decide to do, keep writing, you are brilliant author and I can't wait to review more! Read I mean! And review too! Best of luck with all of your stories...

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y is harry deaf??????

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I really like this story. Its really thoughful and creative. I cant wait for the rest. Please update again soon.

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this is a very interesting story. i have read fics where tom riddle is harrys father, but this is the first with snape. you characters are wonderful harry is so cute, i really hate the dursleys right now, i hope you update soon!

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this is vey interesting story. I hope that you will continue writing the story.

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updat

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kool! i like how snape is portrayed as a dad. its cute, i luv the plot, keep it up, and update soon!

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Please update soon, I absolutely love this story!

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Luv the story. I really like how harry or should i say Daylan and Snape can both turn into wolves. Its really good and update soon. ~Team_Xtreme the eXtreme always makes an impression~

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WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER???????????

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I really like your story don't stop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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please post the next chapter this is a great story. i have never heard anyone make snape nice before apart from me.

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You've got me so interested in this story, it's not even funny. I can't wait to read more.

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uh, there's nothing here. the rest is really good though.

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This was a really good story and I would love to see more of it! I really like the plot so far and as for the twist of Harry being Snape's.... superb! Keep up the good work!

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Great story!!! Plz update!!!

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write more plz

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white more it`s really good

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