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Review #1, by Jenna822 Lost Diaries

4th June 2012:
{Challenge Review}

I was really glad to see that Sirius got up to console his brother, rather than partake in humiliating him. That was nice. :) And OMG I didn't see the Mary/Dorcas thing coming at all. That's awesome! Eeep, it took a dark turn, fast. I was just gonna say, this isn't really a “crossover”. Because a crossover uses characters, settings, etc from both shows. This is more “inspired by PLL” than a crossover. Unless you plan on adding them in during later chapters.

So, I'm wondering, if Regulus is the one behind this, then how did he get the diaries and get the note into Lily's pocket. I've never seen the show, so I'm not sure if it's a trick. I dunno. Maybe it's one of the girls? I'm confused. *frets* Anyways, I feel really sorry for the not-responsible girls. :(

Thank you so much for entering my challenge! Results should be posted some time over this next week. ^_^ --Jenna

Author's Response: Thanks for your review, dear. I'm sorry that I didn't really get to the.."It Gets Better" part, so I'm sure I won't come close to winning. But, thank you. I thought I took the characters...they all have the personalities of all of the characters in PLLs soo...Maybe not, I don't know. And it's a sense of...knowing your sources. That's what it is in the show/books. :) Thank you honey! ~

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Review #2, by slytherinchica08 Pretty, Pretty

30th March 2012:
A great beginning! I love that you're doing a pretty little liars cross over as i love that show as well! I'm really excited to see where you go with this story from here and how each thing changes each girl! I felt the characterization was good in this first chapter and was interesting! Great Job and thanks for entering my challenge!

~Slytherinchica08~

Author's Response: Thank you for your review, dear. I'm glad you think so and like it.

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Review #3, by truly Pretty, Pretty

6th March 2012:
omg love it
PLL is amazing and so is HP & u made amazing crossover x
plz update asap x

Author's Response: Will do :) Thank you for your review!

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Review #4, by Elenia Pretty, Pretty

22nd February 2012:
Heey! Elenia here with your review!

You've got a really interesting start for your story here! I liked that so many things happened and it made want to read forwards to find out more!

I know it's a crossover, but since I haven't seen this PLL, I have no idea how much this resembles the original. So I'll just skip that part from my review d:

That being said, let's start with flow and pacing. I think they were a bit rushed. You might want to read the story once more, and add some descriptions here and there, that would improve it a lot! Especially in the beginning. I felt I was just thrown in the middle of a scene where a lot of things happened and I met many new people, but it was already over before I noticed. So maybe try adding something to it? Maybe slow it up a bit with more background information?

About characters, well, we learned a few things about them, but nothing really important. But as this is just the first chapter, I'm not going say anything else about that. I'm sure it will get better in the next chapters (:

But I really do like this, I think the plot is really interesting and with a few little improvements this could be a great story!

Keep writing! I'm interested in seeing where this story is going (:

Author's Response: Thank yous o much for your review. :) I didn't really know where to start the story - I guess I shouldn't have really started it if I didn't know, but that's all right. Thank you very much for the insite!!!

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Review #5, by ToReleaseMe Pretty, Pretty

11th February 2012:
I'm also a huge fan of PLL, the show and the books! This is a neat little crossover, I think. It has some great potential and it doesn't hurt that Reg is in it :) I love fics about him, so I'm very excited to read more! Please update soon!

Author's Response: I will indeed. I'm glad you like it!! :)

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Review #6, by TheMadsterWitch Pretty, Pretty

13th January 2012:
Its really good! I can't wait to read more! But.. Yes there is a but, at the beginning you wrote that mar had black hair while the rest said blonde and there were other tiny mistakes. Overall it is an amazing chapter, alought I do feel a bit sorry for Regulas and Jeffery, I wonder who killed him?? Maddy x

Author's Response: Oops! OMG. I didn't notice that! D: When the queue goes down a bit, I'll re-do it. ^^ I should have written it down(ah, the irony of it all.) Anyways, thank you so much for your quick review :D

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