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Review #1, by brunettelily

burning books

19th January 2012:

Beautiful writing style! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you, you're very nice!

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Review #2, by girly1393

burning books

18th January 2012:

That was astoundingly beautiful. The progression of Lily and Severus, and it had such little dialogue. The way you used emotions to describe surroundings and change, that was really powerful. It was really, really incredible.

Author's Response: Thank you!

I also like the fact that it had little dialogue, and I tried to use them very carefully, because I wanted everybody to capture the moment.

Thank so much girly1393, I am so glad you liked it :)

xxx

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Review #3, by SnapShot

burning books

18th January 2012:

Wow...the craftsmanship of this is amazing. The diction used is incredible and it makes it quite poetic. I also like the melancholic tone it has. This piece is unusual but that's why I like it so much, it truly is great. I can't wait to read your other works!

Author's Response: Wow thanks a lot! And I'm so happy you caught onto the sad tone- I was hoping it would turn out that way :)

Thank you again! I couldn't be happier right now!

Oh please do, but I do have to warn you that they are quite bad compared to how I write now. They're old and cliche, but if you have the time I would be honoured if you read them!

xxx

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