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Review #1, by Never-ending Magic

But what about Remus?

12th February 2012:

Really really good! I liked it a lot

Author's Response: Thanks! :D

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Review #2, by Angus

But what about Remus?

16th January 2012:

Ohmygod that put me to tears at the end and I NEVER cry! That was so good thankyou
:)

Author's Response: Whoa. :D Thank you!

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Review #3, by foreverendstoday

But what about Remus?

8th January 2012:

Great job with the story especially as you said you don't usually write in engilsh.
Love the senario :) and it was quite well written...however i would find a beta reader to help iron our the typos and some of the odd language use e.g. half past three instead of thirty past three
but otherwise a really greeat story
xx

Author's Response: Thank you! :D It's nice to hear that people likes this story. :) Ah, I should do that, good idea! x)

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Review #4, by Kelly

But what about Remus?

7th January 2012:

It was a good story but you might need to work on your English a little more as it was hard to understand in some places. Good Job though.

Author's Response: Thanks. :D Yeah, I figured, but I'm working on it. :)

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