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Review #1, by RememberDobby Hole in the wall

28th January 2012:
Hey i like this so far. I liked James' sarcastic comment that he was looking at the scenery. Punctuations a little iffy but its not too bad. Its not like this is a school paper or anything. keep at it!

Author's Response: hey thanks ill try and edit the puntuation when i have time but im still trying to write chaper 3 at the moment :)

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