Beautiful story but very sad. Yes, I cried.
It was well written and I enjoyed it. Because you left hope in the end through Hermione. She will pull Ron through it. And we know the future is bright for them.
Good job. Report Review
(My language for "ohmygodyoujustmademespeechless")
Love it! So sad! Cried :(
But it was brill!
I love Small Bump- fave song!! Also love Ed Sheeran. Really enjoyed it! Well done!Author's Response: Aw- I can't believe you cried! Thank you so much :) And yeah, I love that song too! Report Review
That was so good! The last line brought the tears over my eyes! Awesome job:)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
Ah! This is fantastic! First, I was all smiles because I thought you were writing about Rose, and then tears because it wasn't Rose after all. Well done on this emotional roller coaster :)Author's Response: Thanks :) I just heard the song and thought it was a good writing stimulus- you should definitely listen to it! Report Review
I think this is a well written one shot. Really really sad.
I think Hermionewas very good in character. that she first tried to read everything she could find and then fled into books.
And I liked how you ended the ine-shot. that was a nice moment between the two.Author's Response: Yeah- I did think about how she would respond to something like that. I think she would definitely stick to her books! Report Review
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