Hey! Reading and reviewing for the thing in the Gryffie forums! I really liked this :)
Fave quotes: 'Details'... 'you dingbat'- in my opinion a word not used nearly enough :), as with 'bint' :)
And I usually don't like Roxy, but you've made her positively bubbly! Albeit clinically insane.Author's Response: Hi!
I'm so glad you like this, it means so much to me. :')
I also love how all those quotes are from Rox, she's rather smart mouthed isn't she?
Kara sends you cookies, just not Roxys, we don't want you sick. ;)
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This is an intersting start. I do agree with your note at the end, Roxy is going to have to grow on me :D I like Kara alot.
I like that you chose to have Kara be friends with Roxanne instead of the usual "friends of Rose". It's a nice change up :)
I'm favoriting this, and looking forward to updates! Good first chapter.Author's Response: Roxy' character does need some serious growing up to do, but she does get better, promise!
I wanted them to dislike Rose in this fic because usually girls of that age are her best friends, I also wanted a bit of a change.
Thanks for the review, the next chapter should be up soon! xx :) Report Review
Ooh! Looking forward to the next chapters! Kara is pretty cool, but Roxy has won me over completely!Author's Response: Hi!
I wasn't sure about Rox at first, then I wrote more and more of her and really started to love her personality. I'm so glad you're looking forward to more chapters.
Thank you for the review. xx Report Review
I love the title of this story!! It's so funny xD It must have been great fun to write for NaNo :)
The last line reminda me of The Hunger Games O.o but everything reminds me of the hunger games.
It was really well written and pretty good grammar!
LWG xxAuthor's Response: Hi!
You're the first review! This made me so happy. :')
I love the title too, I think it's one of the best I have come up with.
The hunger games are amazing, 'nuff said.
Thank you so, so much!
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