Hey! Reading and reviewing for the thing in the Gryffie forums! I really liked this :)
Fave quotes: 'Details'... 'you dingbat'- in my opinion a word not used nearly enough :), as with 'bint' :)
And I usually don't like Roxy, but you've made her positively bubbly! Albeit clinically insane.

Author's Response: Hi!
I'm so glad you like this, it means so much to me. :')
I also love how all those quotes are from Rox, she's rather smart mouthed isn't she?
Kara sends you cookies, just not Roxys, we don't want you sick. ;)
Thanks for the review! xx

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This is an intersting start. I do agree with your note at the end, Roxy is going to have to grow on me :D I like Kara alot.

I like that you chose to have Kara be friends with Roxanne instead of the usual "friends of Rose". It's a nice change up :)

I'm favoriting this, and looking forward to updates! Good first chapter.

Author's Response: Roxy' character does need some serious growing up to do, but she does get better, promise!

I wanted them to dislike Rose in this fic because usually girls of that age are her best friends, I also wanted a bit of a change.

Thanks for the review, the next chapter should be up soon! xx :)

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Ooh! Looking forward to the next chapters! Kara is pretty cool, but Roxy has won me over completely!

Author's Response: Hi!
I wasn't sure about Rox at first, then I wrote more and more of her and really started to love her personality. I'm so glad you're looking forward to more chapters.
Thank you for the review. xx

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Hiya! ^_^
I love the title of this story!! It's so funny xD It must have been great fun to write for NaNo :)
The last line reminda me of The Hunger Games O.o but everything reminds me of the hunger games.
It was really well written and pretty good grammar!
Love it!
LWG xx

Author's Response: Hi!
You're the first review! This made me so happy. :')
I love the title too, I think it's one of the best I have come up with.
The hunger games are amazing, 'nuff said.
Thank you so, so much!
xx

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