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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by BKL8008 Little Lily

13th April 2012:
OK, songfics are usually not my cup of tea. ;) (Even though I did one once.)
This is one is cute, but it's too cute for me. You know what I mean? It's good in its capture of childhood milestones, and the ending is just perfect. It all fits very well. However...well...I'm a guy you know...where's the blood and gore and War?! haha! Sorry, had to say that.
Not to criticize! OK, I have to confess, as you know, if it had been about one of the boys...Gimme some time, with my new Goddaughter, and I'm sure I'll change my mind. She is so cute!

Author's Response: Sorry for all the mush! But I'm sure your goddaughter will indeed bring you round eventually...
I'm glad you could kinda see past the slushiness and say that it all seems to fit nicely. That is good to know, particularly if it wasn't really your type of thing! Thanks for reviewing.

Alex :D


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Review #2, by inkbutterfly Little Lily

29th February 2012:
I love the way you incorporated the song and the story together, it was really good.
Its just a massively 'Naaaww' story, short and sweet, showing how Ginny and Harry love their children and that amazing journey of her growing up :)
Good job!

-Kerryn xx

Author's Response: 'N'awww' was just about the response I was going for, so it's great to know that I seem to have succeeded. Thanks again for reviewing, I will definitely have to come and check out your stories to return the favour as soon as I have time.

Alex :D


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Review #3, by stefanie437 Little Lily

10th February 2012:
this made me want to cry. so sweet.

Author's Response: Thanks so much - I suppose almost making you cry is good thing in this situation! Thanks for reviewing :)

Alex :D


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Review #4, by jellybean2109 Little Lily

21st January 2012:
that was so cute as you read on it was like you were going through stages of her life.
the last part was so emotional from when she cut her knee to when she went to hogwarts

Author's Response: Aww thankyou! I'm glad you liked it and thankyou so much for taking the time to review, I really do appreciate it :)

Alex :D


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Review #5, by magicmuggle01 Little Lily

6th January 2012:
Not bad for a first attempt. You put alot of love and feeling into showing the way that Harry and Ginny love their little Lily. Well done 10/10.

Author's Response: Aww thankyou :) I'm so grateful for all your reviews. I'm glad that Harry and Ginny's love came across. Chapter 5 of 'Journeys on the Hogwarts Express' is now in the queue btw!

Alex :D


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