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Review #1, by ines0803 Mysteries Suck.

16th February 2013:
I've just read your one-shots. I think it was the first time I was rooting for James/OC. I always want him to be with Lily, but not in this one :(
Could you PLEASE do more one-shots with them? Or maybe a short story? I would love to know more about them! How did they start to write to each other? And will he find Lottie? I REALLY want to know everything.
Amazing story!

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Review #2, by Please Mysteries Suck.

10th February 2013:
Hi, i want to ask you something, could you make a storie like this? A Jily whitout lily chouse another character, like a sister to Sirius or something? Please?

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Review #3, by AC_rules Mysteries Suck.

23rd February 2012:
I guess this is my last review! This has been fun though :)

James POV /kind of/ made me think of it from his point of view a little bit but I still think he's a first class fool for messing things up so royally what with Lily and Lotto and all of this stuff.

And the moment between lily and James should have been cute, but then... ah, I don't know. You have me torn my friend! :)


Author's Response: Wow as if you've read every single thing I've posted :D It has been fun and I loved your story! I think your a great writer as I've also read the art of breathing before :D
Anyway I am kind of torn but I guess James didn't know Lotto was Lottie he thought it was Lily especially when she said "Sorry I'm late" or whatever she says so I'm kind of like it isn't James' fault but I am torn between who he should of been with :}


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Review #4, by PolyJuice_ Mysteries Suck.

19th February 2012:
Ouch. That almost made it worse for James! Poor Lottie! Anyway, so sorry this is so short but I have nothing to say but wow.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the reviews on them! There so lovely!
I wanted to get James' point out so he doesn't seem that much like the bad guy so you can feel his feeling as well as Lotties :}
Sometimes the shorter ones make you smile more :D


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Review #5, by ginerva_molly_weasley Mysteries Suck.

12th February 2012:
This is even cuter in James's point of view.

It shows that although he's a guy he still has the same worries as some of the girls.

I love the fact that he actually thinks he's falling in love with Lotto and his suspicion that it was Lily but then because she was with Frank then it obviously wasn't.

I love the fact aswell that he also wasn't completely oblivious to the people around him because he did notice Lotto in the end. It's really sweet!

Author's Response: Isn't it? I love James so much! =D
See I think guys would have all the same worries that girls would just maybe not as much haha :D
I had to make it seem like James wasn't the totally bad person in the story as he then did think Lily was Lotto and then it does show at the end that he does care about Lottie! :D
Thanks for the lovely feedback :D


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Review #6, by RavenclawWayToBe Mysteries Suck.

9th January 2012:
WAH!OH MA GOSH! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! i LOVED how you showed the story from James' POV, when i saw that you posted this i think i had a minor heart attack! YOU ARE AN INCREDIBLE WRITER! NEVER STOP, SERIOUSLY!! I LOVE ALL OF YOUR STORIES! I like Lily, but i can see why you love Lottie more, i think i might too :O But seriously this story is amazing and i hope you write like an AU where they get together cause that'd be AMAZING! Also, where do you get your banners, they are AMAZING! sorry for writing so much, but i thought you should know just how BOSSMAZING (Boss and amazing, ;) ) your story is and how much i love it. So i think thats all, ill just stop being such a random creeper and writing giant reviews on your stories now!!! BYEEE!!!

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for this review! I thinks its one of the nicest ones I've ever got XD
I'm so glad you love this story even if it did give you a minor heart attack. I wrote one in James' POV and I just had to post it for my own sake! =D
At least I'm not the only one who loves lottie more than Lily! XD
Thank you so much, I won't stop writing. I wouldn't stop even if nobody liked my stories but it makes me happy that people do XD
I actually make my banner's and chapter images myself, I actually made the letters to prongs banner before I even had a story in mind so it inspired me to write one. :)
Don't worry I love long reviews they make me smile even more! XD
Like I'm sure this is a long reply ;)
Thanks again!


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