Oh Cliche...
I was overrun by the adorbs-ness of this story!
A little tip - I think you portrayed Snape too harshly.It would have been nice if he was more gentle with Lily and stuff, after all he DID love her :P
Hope you write more Marauder Stories!
~Wingy~

Author's Response: Why thank you :D i know Snape was a little harsh in this story but i had my reasons (After all i do love a good Snilly story) Snape had to be harsh to show how much James really cared about Lily :) Thanks for the review and i'll try to do more marauders stories, they're fun :)

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Brilliant first chapter! :D I love James and Lily!

Author's Response: Thank you :) I love them too! Thanks for the review.

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This is so cute! I absolutely love the ending!
I like the way you've done Lily (her personality is great!), and this story - though short - has an engaging plot. :)
Keep Writing!
MarauderLover7.

Author's Response: Thank you :) its great to get a review like this! Makes me so happy that you liked it :) thanks for the review!

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that was sooo totally absolutely gorgeous. not over the top drama, just simple Lily&James

Author's Response: Thank you :D i'm glad you like it!! Thanks for reviewing. :)

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that story is soo adorablely cute i loved it this is my first lily/james fic that i've read and and this one is fav story ever!!! great great supper awsomely great story

Author's Response: :D Thank You! That means so much to me that you liked it so much! I'm speechless :) Just thanks :)

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really really great! It had all the great elements of a lily and james tale that I love: lily's internal struggle about our boy wonder., her realization that she loves him and a confrontation with snape and unrequited love for love. my only criticism is that you shoud make your next fic longer!

Author's Response: Thank you :D I'm glad you liked it!! And this was my fist one-shot so i didn't really know how long i should do it. But i glad for your criticism & next time i'll make it longer :)Thanks again for your rewiew!

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really good i hope you keep going

Author's Response: Thanks :) & i might, people keep asking for more so maybe :)

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Aw i luv it

Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Please add more chapters your a really good writer maybe you could write about the rest of the seventh year add some drama

Author's Response: Thanks & I will think about it. there could be some drama i have already thought of that i could add to this! :)

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