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Review #1, by MarauderLover7 Snowflakes

10th January 2012:
Aww! This story was so cute! There were a few grammar mistakes, but none were too bad. I particularly liked the Polyjuice Potion part. :)
Keep Writing,
MarauderLover7.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I am glad that you like it. I sent out an update with corrected grammar, and I am just waiting for validation.
-Fawkes


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Review #2, by CassiePotter Snowflakes

5th January 2012:
That was a good one-shot. I really like all the detail you give, and I loved James's and Sirius's lines! The only thing I have to say is at one point during the snowball fight, you switched tenses, which was a little confusing. It would make it more clear if you just stayed in past tense. Overall it was a great story!
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I was rushing to get it up before queue closure, so I did not get to really proof the story. I think I will edit it soon! Thanks!
-Fawkes


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Review #3, by DracoGal Snowflakes

25th December 2011:
Awe this was so cute!

Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you like it. I am about to start another one-shot. Read it. Thanks for reviewing!
-Fawkes


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Review #4, by BKL8008 Snowflakes

25th December 2011:
Well that was just fluffy! ;) I rather liked it. I think it's a good capture of the James/Lily "first date" theme. Good prank, too.

Author's Response: Thanks! I think there was probably enough fluff in this story to open a stuffed animal factory! Thanks for the review!
-Fawkes


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Review #5, by mischeif managed2017 Snowflakes

25th December 2011:
You may be open to criticism but there is nothing bad I can think of to tell you.
now if only you could get mom up
Great story well written
- mischeif managed2017

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
-Fawkes


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