I really like your story!! as;hjkrghdf;gha;ghorhv hoiroiv;ahvjdfhgk;adjghjkaghakghad;ghao; (keyboard spaxxum) I am not good with words!
~Ariana Report Review
This has been a really interesting start, I like it. I love how, even though Lily's dead, Lorcan isn't like 'LIFE IS OVER' and he's just quite chilled. It's definitely different to a lot of fics I've read and I'm really interested about what will come next so I have favourited this and I can't wait for the next chapter :D Report Review
Okay i love it. Even though it is making me really sad that Lily is already dead. But I love Lorcan, and you have a really good writing style, and gah, do bother! this story is great!
Oh and really good cliffhanger haha. Murdered? who the hell murdered such an adorable Lily?!
Anyways, intriguing and original start, so I will stick around :) Report Review
I really liked the beginning of this fic! It seems to be quite an interesting idea. I absolutely love how everything isn't ridiculously dramatic or over the top. Lorcan just finds the stone and doesn't die trying and also doesn't feel insanely suicidal just because his girlfriend died which is refreshing:)
Please continue with it because you are a talented writer! Report Review
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