I love this story so far! Lya is brilliant, and so realistic. It's refreshing to have a girl character who just throws her hair up in a bun, doesn't bother with make-up and just wears lounge clothes... I don't understand girls (even thought I am one) I mean come on, seriously, who has the time or the energy that early in the morning? I certainly don't.
Totally shipping Lya/Al, just saying. I'm not very happy with the way Scorpius is keeping his relationship with Lya a secret... It just seems like Al and Lya are better suited to one another. That is, if he stops being a two-timing douchebag.
Anyway... This is brilliant so far! I can't wait to read on so keep updating :D x Report Review
I really like this story so far, except I don't know whether I want her with Albus or Scorpius. Your writing flows well and its really enjoyable to read so update soon! Report Review
aaah glad that you seem to want more al/lya!
haha this chapter wass really good! i loveeed it soo please update more :) Report Review
Both chapters were lovely, written and described well and interesting, so I'm excited for the next chapter.
About the relationships... So far Lya/Scor is sweet, but I can't help the feeling that Scorpius isn't wholly trustworthy? I don't know what it is... To be honest I'm sick of Scorose, but as long as something dramatic and new brings them together it's cool with me. It would be fun to see how Al/Lya would work out though. Just my two cents :)
Can't wait for an update! Report Review
Seeing as you created this story with the intention of Al/Lya and Rose/Scorpius I think you should stick to that. The idea of Lya falling in love with the guy she was helping to get back into a relationship caught my eye and although Scorpius/Lya was sweet it just wouldn't be the same story (plus, as a scorose fan, I think that Rose would be better suited to Scorpius anyway) I hope you keep everything as it is.
Can't wait for the next chapter :P Report Review
Okay, so when you asked about the possible pairings to end up with at the start of the chapter i was completely unsure of who i would like to get together. Then i read the chapter. And it really seems obvious to me that it should be Lya and Al together, at least i don't think he should get back together with Izzy. Anyway, loved this chapter, can't wait to see where this goes! Report Review
I like the idea for this story! I also like the idea of Scorpius and Lya together because sometimes I get sick of Scorpius and Rose always being put together (even though I have a story of my own like that ;)) ha. Anyways, keep up the good writing:)
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Great chapter! I think since both Al and Izzy are ok with their relationship ending, my preference right now would be Al/Lya. Report Review
wow a bit confusing, especially this last chapter, but i really like the storylinee! so she's supposed to fall in love with al? i'd like to see how you take this story :) lya's dating scorpius here but on your story, your couples are rose/scorpius, soo although i find lya/scorpius quite cute actually (really surprised, i'm a big scorose fan!) i'm hoping to seee rose soon :D
update sooon -VB Report Review
aah I loved this chapter! at the beginning I was a little bit scared that it wouldn't turn out the way I wanted it to but it totally did!! :) thanks for that ;)
great work! and btw I'd prefer an ending Al/Lya and Scorose and someone nice for Izzy :) That'd be awesome! :D
loved it, well done! Report Review
this chapter is awesome! it's funny that both Al and Izzy are okay with the break up but they can't imagine what Lya is going to do to get them back together... in your A/N of this chapter you mentioned that you were still deciding on how this story should end, well, if I can give my opinion it would be funny to see Lya trying to get Izzy and Al back together but while she was helping, she (Lya) and Al would maybe fall in love?
I just don't see her staying with Scorpius because you mentioned in the beggining of this chapter that Scorpius isn't willing to go public with their relationship so... I hope this suggestion was helpful but feel free to ignore me anway... lol :P I can't wait to read the next chapter! this story is awesome!!!^_^
Harry and Ginny Report Review
Al/Lya all the way! ;)
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Bah! You have forced me into reviewing with that threat of not continuing! Absolutely loved it, and you must continue! Report Review
Hey! This is apocalypse, here with your review!
Let's start off with the areas of concern, shall we?
Plot: A very unusual yet very interesting plot; it sure grabbed my attention. I like the way you took off with the whole idea of match making thing. The plot and execution was very good. One would think that with so many scenarios being narrated they would get confused. But your execution was so good that I did not get confused and actually enjoyed reading the chapter. The story flowed very well and did not break off at any certain point.
One point that I wasn't really able to digest. Izzy and Albus were the 'golden couple' of Hogwarts and they were liked by everyone, okay. But when she, as you would say, blurted out Al's secret, they all looked at her like she'd just committed a crime. I wanna know why? Why did they all blame her? I mean are they so madly in love with the couple that they simply and completely ignore what she just said? What's wrong with the people of Hogwarts? I hope you know what I mean.
Characterization: Let's start off with Lya. Well, with her 'bloody,' she sort of reminds me of Ron. =) It seems she's sort of a mixture of various HP characters and I must say that I have never seen this kind of a personality before. It's good. The fact that she is the 'match maker' for Hogwarts; it's very sweet of her to help others. However there's this part you mentioned: 'Lya's own love life was a complicated disaster...' and in the second half you mentioned Malfoy referring to her as 'my girl' and later 'You know I love you!' well, this doesn't give the impression of a complicated, disastrous relationship. If you could clarify as to how exactly the realtionship is complicated, then that would be great. Or is that coming up in the later chapters?
Malfoy: I'm not sure what I think of him at this point in time. I mean, in the start, he's caring and calm. But then she's afraid of him plotting as his plots end up having her embarrassed. Isn't that sort of contradictory on itself? Uh, I'm not exactly sure if I'm saying what I mean to say. I did not understand how you've portrayed him. Is he calm and caring or cunning and deceitful?
Albus: Woah. That's a totally different perspective of his character though I must say it's not completely unique. His attitude is sort of the kind one would expect from James. But even with James, not to THAT extreme. It's fun to see Harry Potter's son to be the "bad" guy here. =P
Izzy: Well not much on her personality yet; just her appearance. I get this feeling I'm going to like her. I'll be looking forward for you to brief your readers on her character. =)
Overall a very good chapter and a very very interesting start to this story. I hope my review helped you! =) I'll be looking forward to see how all this play's out and what Scorp's role is in the entire thing. =D Report Review
I really like it so far. I'm already interested in Lya so far, she seems like a very cool, quirky character and it is my belief that we all need a goofy, classic romantic comedy sometimes. It keeps the fluff in our lives so I'm good with the subtly cliche plot. :) Please update soon because I am eager to know what happens next! Report Review
hey Molly, it's me Sofia (blackhorse from TDA)! :P anyway, this is a great start and i'm curious what you will write for the next chapter! it's funny how you had Scorpius proposing to Lya to make Al and Izzy get back together and she thought that they were going to work on that but then he said that she was going to do everything! great job on this chapter Molly! you're awesome and I can't wait till next chapter!^_^
Harry and Ginny Report Review
I love how this is going so far, I can't wait to see what she does to try and fix it and what the consequences will be. Can't wait for the next chapter! Report Review
Hahaha I loved it! It seems like a great beginning to what looks like an entertaining fic :D
I love Lya's character so far because she really seems to have a good heart but disaster just follows her around. Please continue with this and update soon.
It was great! :) Report Review
I like it.
I like Scorp's character, you made him seem like a nice caring guy.
I normally love Al in fics, but he seems like a jerk. TEN TIMES? really Al!
Lya seems like a bigmouth :D She reminds me of one of my best friends. A good friend, but just can't keep a secret.
Izzy, well. We haven't seen much of her yet, but she seems like the cliche popular girl. I really hope she isn't to mad at Lye. I mean, it isn't her fault Al cheated on her TEN TIMES! Lol. Update soon, love. Report Review
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