I don't normally read NextGen fics but this great! Writing is superb and the humor spot on!Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Report Review
I have to say I'm quite taken with this. For several reasons;
Firstly, you write well. You're grammar and punctuation far surpass mine, and you have a good vocabulary, which when looking for something new to read is a thing that irks me, in its rareness.
Secondly, the comedy in this feels entirely natural. Which is good.
And thirdly, the idea of a Wizbox amuses me greatly and I now want one.
Well done :)
BryarlyAuthor's Response: Thank you very much! This review was beyond kind.
I would love a Wizbox of my own as well, it would be magnificent. I would do whatever it is you do with Wizboxes with it every day.
Well, thank you for this lovely review. I hope you liked the second chapter too :) Report Review
Please continue C: I'm loving this story so far, especially since you put Rose into Slytherin - not something many people think to do. x Looking forward to the party XD
~ RiopurpleAuthor's Response: Oh, Rose is the best. So much fun to write like this. Glad you like the story, and thanks for the lovely review :) Report Review
Love, love, love this story! I love the characterization of James and Louis and Nickie—I just can't wait to read more!Author's Response: Yay, thanks! Glad you like it :) Report Review
lol :) brill first chapter. i loved how hung up James is. its really funny :)Author's Response: Thank you :D Report Review
This was absolutely amazing! I love how James is obsessed with her. update soon please!Author's Response: I hope to update soon. Thank you so much for your review!! Report Review
I just want to say thank you. This is one of the funniest, potentially saddest, and generally all round best stories that I have read in a long time. I cannot wait for an update!!Author's Response: Well your welcome! Such kind words, thank you so much (: Report Review
I really like this story so far!
It's nice to see a story from the boy's point of view every once in a while because people don't really write it as often it seems. It's also a nice change to see it from the pov of the guy who likes/is in love with the girl and is trying to win her over because it is usually the girl falling in love with the guy out of her league-etc.
I love how hung up he is on the Jeremy incident! It is an honest mistake and most people have trouble remembering names after all. And I agree with the reviewer before me, I love the quip about innocent Lily and him finding her in the broom cupboard. You have to love a brother who is in denial lol.
I hope to see an update for this soon Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!! Yeah, it's actually quiet fun to write from a boys point of view, it lets me say and do alot of things I couldn't so otherwise.
Glad you like it, and I hope to update soon (: Report Review
Ooooh I got first review :D
For it being your first time, writing a first person boy's pov you did incredibly well. I'm already in love with this story. It kind of reminds me of the James/Lily pairing but with your own twist on it. That part were James talked about Lily being all innocent and then finding her topless in a broom cupboard had me laughing out loud ^-^
Anyway, amazing job and I can't wait to read more. Also I make chapter images, so if you're interested I can make some for you. I made all of the chapter images for PygmyPuffLover's Being Summer and Typical Clueless Guy, if you wanna see them :) Wow, I sound like an advertisement now. Sorry about that :PAuthor's Response: Thank you for this ego-boosting first review (:
I'm glad you like it, you have no idea how nervous I was posting this story! The second chapter is halfway written, and should hopefully be up soon!
Thanks for reading and reviewing. Report Review
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