Liked how you threw in Astoria in there ;) Very smart.
Keep writing :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing :)
*Maria Report Review
I laughed at this:
"Really I'll take care of it. Go snog Harry or something."
A friendly little tip for ya: don't rush yourself. Let their "relationship", whether it be friendship or lovers, grow GRADUALLY. I really do believe you have potential here, and I'm only a page away if you need any help :)
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You can't be so straight forward. I like your snotty draco but you need to be a bit more mysterious. Your a good writer but there is always room for inprovement.keep writing!Author's Response: Ahh but I can Ms. Riddle. That's pretty much the whole bloody point of this story. Thats kinda the way I write. Report Review
I first read your song fic and loved your writing style. Now this seems to be pretty interesting, I'm already hooked! Although there's some things I don't get... like how the chapter descriptions match with the chapters? And I'm I just crazy or was there a little Zabini/Ginny going on? Don't worry about the size of chapters, it keeps them easy to read. When will the next one be on?Author's Response: Thanks! yeah there is some Z/G stuff lol. Report Review
Hermione's a thief?! 0.oAuthor's Response: Why would you think that. Report Review
Please do the second chapter!Author's Response: Should be updated after the holiday. Report Review
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