Liked how you threw in Astoria in there ;) Very smart.

Keep writing :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

*Maria

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Hi, hon!

I laughed at this:

"Really I'll take care of it. Go snog Harry or something."

A friendly little tip for ya: don't rush yourself. Let their "relationship", whether it be friendship or lovers, grow GRADUALLY. I really do believe you have potential here, and I'm only a page away if you need any help :)

*Maria(8/10)

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You can't be so straight forward. I like your snotty draco but you need to be a bit more mysterious. Your a good writer but there is always room for inprovement.keep writing!

Author's Response: Ahh but I can Ms. Riddle. That's pretty much the whole bloody point of this story. Thats kinda the way I write.

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I first read your song fic and loved your writing style. Now this seems to be pretty interesting, I'm already hooked! Although there's some things I don't get... like how the chapter descriptions match with the chapters? And I'm I just crazy or was there a little Zabini/Ginny going on? Don't worry about the size of chapters, it keeps them easy to read. When will the next one be on?

Author's Response: Thanks! yeah there is some Z/G stuff lol.

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Hermione's a thief?! 0.o

Author's Response: Why would you think that.

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Please do the second chapter!

Author's Response: Should be updated after the holiday.

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