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Review #1, by Timechild Last Christmas

2nd January 2012:
Interesting fic.

The emotion showed was nicely done. It was quite believable, especially George's.

Good detail on the story.

Overall, good job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much :)

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Review #2, by Avanell 2 Last Christmas

31st December 2011:
Great story...just wish there could have been a little more for Draco ;)

Author's Response: Thank you :)
I always wondered what Draco's life would be like after the war, but i imagined it being difficult for a long while before getting better. i may write a one-shot for him.


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Review #3, by goaskalice Last Christmas

30th December 2011:
You've certainly got a knack for writing, and I really enjoyed this. I hope you do more Post-Hogwarts stuff like this. Anyway, too bad I didn't read this before Christmas, would've got me more into the Holiday spirit. 10/10 for you
Cheers

Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
I'm currently in the middle of writing a story in the Marauders era but I enjoy wondering about what happens betweent the war and nineteen years later, so i might do another P-H piece. Thanks for the great review, and happy new year!


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Review #4, by Loopy456 Last Christmas

29th December 2011:
Aww I really love this. I have never really thought much about the Post-Hogwarts Era (I prefer Next Generation) but, now that I think about it, this is the perfect way for this Christmas to occur. The Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione relationships both seem to be really intense considering their ages and how long they have been together, but I suppose that given what they have been through that isn't really surprising. *Favourited*

Author's Response: Thank you!
Pardon my intense-ness, the Christmas spirit got to me and this was the result ;)
You are the first person to favourite, it means a lot! Thank you so much!!!


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Review #5, by ladymblack Last Christmas

19th December 2011:
Cute, although I can't imagine who Kayla is. It was rather well written, despite the spacing (which is definitely something to get used to on this site). I loved all of the little vignettes of the different groups of people and thought it flowed well. Good job!

Author's Response: Kayla is my own creation of a partner for George, but i forgot to put that in the original summary so its fixed now. :)
Yes, the spacing can be quite a pain sometimes. I had to fix it about four times before it looked normal!
Thank you for the review!!


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Review #6, by Jen Last Christmas

19th December 2011:
Nice story. Kayla confused me somewhat, but I'm guessing she's your own?

One mistake - you have written:
"Maybe, maybe not. I know that everyone misses Tonks, Lupin and George but at the same time, we all still have each other, and I think that will get us through, just like it has since the war."
It should be Fred that they are missing. Other than that, I loved it. Although I do find myself wishing for Draco to find some happiness in his life

Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I'm glad you found that error, i completely missed it when i was proofreading! And yes, Kayla is my own creation. Your review also reminded me to put that in the summary.
A much appreciated review, thank you!


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