I love how portrayed that snape actually had feelings. It was really well written and i loved it!Author's Response: Thank you so much! I had a really fun time writing this one! Report Review
Well, i guess that song is a bit dark isn't it. I think this definitely showcases alot of the love that Snape has for Lily and i think you did a good job representing the memories he had about her and the way he thinks about her. You had a great description of everything and i think you should definitely write more fan-fics! You were great and the only thing i think you could have improved on was that Snape seemed a bit over-bearing of Lily and i think she would have had something to say, but overall this was great. And really it's all about how you view it, because after all it is your story. But anyways, great job!
-RavenclawWayToBeAuthor's Response: Wow, what can I say? Thank you so much! You have no idea what this means to me.. I haven't got a review on my soon-to-be-abondoned novella or this since October! You don't know how lonely I've been, haha! I will definitely take what you said and hopefully enforce it in my future works. Again, thanks so much! Report Review
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