Heyyy! Yes! It's up! Okay. So good story so far, can't wait to see where this is gonna go. Um your summary is a bit choppy and super boring, just being honest. So yeah, change that. :P CHANGE YOUR SUMMARY!
Other than that, good so far, maybe you need a bit more puntuaction but yeahhh! :) Now I can request your banner and stuff. I guess it's a tiny bit boring, but you had to start the story off. Cool! :) Go Morfina aka Quin and Iris aka Lauren LOL. 9/10 now cuz it's a bit boring but it was a good start and all stories have to start somewhere. Besides, my story doesn't get "good" until like chapter 10, aha.
-Kat/Dory/MarikaAuthor's Response: yeahh well the reason why it is is choppy is cuz they won't let me put in everything:( it can only be like seriously 3 friggin sentences and idk how to conclude it into 3 sentences Report Review
An interesting idea. I can't wait to see where you go with this concept. So 9/10 and adding to favs so I know when you update.Author's Response: hey thanks so much! this is my first story so it would be cool if you told your friends about it to get the word out. keep checking back and your review means so much to me and yeahhh.
-marisa Report Review
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