Haha, I just love the truth or dare xD you need to have more of mayfield/sirius going on here man!!! Nice sex talk buisness going on here;)
KEEP WRITING AND ULOADING AND DON'T LEAVE IT SO LONG!!! ;(
Sorry, rantting... :PAuthor's Response: Ehheee, aw thanks:) Report Review
Omg. This is an amazing fanfic! I absolutely love how you've done it from Sirius' point of view. I love Alex to. Update soon!Author's Response: Thankyou! I will try- been holding for a while;) Report Review
woah! this chapter sure made me realise the whole impact of this story!
alex has really bloomed! from quite and mysterious, she has gone to open and daring... this chapter was fantabulous!
the way mayfield seduced regulus, the way pads felt jealous and possessive but didn't even realise it...
really, it was totally worth the read!
keep writing and keep happy.
fannaAuthor's Response: Awh thankyou! I was really unsure about this chapter but I'm glad you are supportive of it ^-^ Report Review
hi there! missed me?
sorry i haven't been around for a while!
had exams and all... it was hella busy!
but now i'm back and ready to R&R!
and by the way, this is one awesome chapter! totally twisted alex and pad's relationship...
i wonder what's gonna happen now.
i'm sure they wouldn't get together so easily or that would be half the story over right there..
by the way, greek mythology rocks! from medusa to zues making out with nearly every goddess there is.. :P
percy jackson 4ever!
fannaAuthor's Response: ahaa, s'okay XD and psssh, getting together? That's not alex's shizz;) and ehehee, PERCY JACKSON FOR THE WIN. Apart from hp:P Report Review
I LOVE this story! It is so cool! I cannot wait for the match! And it was so cool when Alex totally owned Regulus!
Amazing story... Keep up the brilliant chapters!
HorsepatronusAuthor's Response: Ahahah, thankyou:') Report Review
Hey just thought I'd make your day because I'm not gonna see you for a WHOLE WEEK!!! :O and I know that you'll miss me :P
This was pretty good xD She was funny when she tricked Regulus...Author's Response: :O I am gonna miss you:( And hehehe, thanks:') Report Review
I really like the way it's headed. At the beginning of this chapter, it seemed cliche, but it definitely deviated from that.Author's Response: Thank you, I'm trying to keep it from going in the typical direction:) Report Review
This was certainly the best yet. It was a little too vulgar for my taste, but the story just keeps getting better.Author's Response: Yes, I understand how it might seem vulgar- I don't particularly enjoy writing those scenes:L Thank you though, I feel my writing improves throughout my stories; starting okay, but getting better as I get more accustomed and used to the story:) Report Review
Not bad. I definitely enjoyed reading it, and I think the writing is improving and characters are becoming more distinct.Author's Response: Thank you! :) Report Review
Probably my favorite so far. The story is getting somewhere.Author's Response: Thank you!:) Report Review
I like the general plot line. I wish the foreshadowing was little bit more discreet; I feel like I can guess what's coming next.Author's Response: Nice idea, thank you:') It's just there are a lot of twists and things you wouldn't expect in your right mind to happen:P The foreshadowing is a fine line to balance that I still haven't found- not too much, but enough that they can understand that something is going to happen?:P Anyways, thank you!:') Report Review
Good story. Some conventions and wording issues bothered me, but the structure and gist are engaging.Author's Response: Ah, I shall proof read it when I have finished it- I'm always open to critiscism! After all, I am an amateur writer. Thank you:') Report Review
Well done catfish :)
Nice chappy- thank GOD Iris is gone (I hate her.)
:D WRITE WRITE WRITE :pAuthor's Response: Catfish? And I will do :') Report Review
yay! another chapter.. i was beginning to lose hope, it has been so long!
anyway... this was an awesome chapter.. i love the way alex and pads are so brotherly...
and i loved the prank idea and the break up scene as well..a and prong was a real darling for the way he handled things with the two...
oh, and a sleep over thingymabob is a cool idea (joing beds in a circle?) and i wanna have one with my bff's soon!
fannaAuthor's Response: Never lose hope! The other fanfic's (which I hope you will try- the Apartment) chapter didn't validate first time:'( But it's all good;) And the whole brotherly relationship I love as well- but it's going to change quite a bit in the next few chapters, but not in the way you expect...>:D And yaay- I have inspired sleepover thingymabobs, and yeah thats kind of the gist- I'll let you imagine the format though exactly:') I will do- byeee!:') Report Review
LOL! Siriusly, when will padfoot learn!!Author's Response: :D Tell me about it... Report Review
ok, everything makes SO much more sense now.
not that i didn't love the next chapter but i couldn't help but wonder why mayfield was all chummy with the marauders all of a sudden and where did the handcuffs go...
this chapter was awesome..
beauty and the beast, being one of my all time favourites, just made it all more special..
anyway, update again, soon!
fannaAuthor's Response: I will, and thankyou!:) Report Review
Fun chapter! Mayfield's stalking is almost creepy lol. I can't wait to find out what James was gonna tell Sirius, if you'll let us know!Author's Response: :D And I will do indeed!:) Keep reviewing! Make an account and favourite if you want:) Report Review
Paahahahaha! this is quite serious, yet funny at the same time :) love it. sirius really is clueless though, isnt he??? :/
anyways disha, KEPP WRITING YOUR ARSE OFF XDAuthor's Response: :) *keep ;) Report Review
awww.. she's fitting right in!
btw, what happened to the handcuffs?
did they sort of disappear when she showed snuffs the memories?
anyway, this was quite a nice chapter... alex sure is fitting right into the gang, isn't she?
and i love the way we don't have to go through the whole we'll-tell-her-everything process.. that can be annoying sometimes..
i mean, we already know all the animagus stuff, you know..
fannaAuthor's Response: Oh. My. God. I am SO stupid! I've missed out uploading a chapter! GAH. I've uploaded it now- it explains what happens :D Report Review
Really great :D
each chapter you submit makes my dayAuthor's Response: N'awww, thanks:) Means alot to me too! Need to write the next chappy, been really busy, but hopefully it'll be up in a week or so!:) Report Review
Sirius is really that clueless? Really?
Waiting for onset of jealous!Mayfield ;D
AH. I love this story. Update fast!Author's Response: I still need to write the rest- been really busy! But keep checking after like a week!:) Report Review
Wow! How deep! Love the intrigue!Author's Response: Thankyou!:D Report Review
This is a reaaly sweet scene, although it must be bloody awkward for him- yu know, as they kissed :') write more!!!Author's Response: They were 10. Plus he forgot her and broke her, and think that was more of a pressing matter on his mind.:) Report Review
ok, first i went "aw!"
then: Oh young minds, wait till you get hormones mini me… : ROLF!
that . was. hillarious!
and then i had tears in my eyes as i wondered "why, oh why pads, did you forget her.. and how?"
i can't wait for the next chapter!
update soon and you know you can count on me! :)
fannaAuthor's Response: :D Mini me...;)
+it won't be explained just yet!
and I'm putting it up for validation right now!
And I know I can count on you:D Report Review
:O Poor Mayfield.
I'd guess someone's being shooting off Obliviate! Guess I'll have to wait to find out! Loved this chapter!Author's Response: I know!:D
And a hint to if your idea is right or not: what is up with this accurate guesswork?!:@
Thanks!:) Report Review
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